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commit    11cd377f53bf0a70518668936eef1ccce63381c7
Author:   Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
Date:     Tue Jan 25 01:49:51 2022 +0000
First released in: 10.20, 11.15, 12.10, 13.6, 14.2

    doc: Fix some grammar
    
    This is an extraction of the user-visible changes done in 410aa24,
    including all the relevant documentation parts.
    
    Author: Justin Pryzby
    Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/20220124030001.GQ23027@telsasoft.com
    Backpatch-through: 10


 doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml          | 2 +-
 doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml | 7 +++----
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
index f9936eac010..a51822b5d55 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
@@ -1809,7 +1809,7 @@ The commands accepted in walsender mode are:
       streaming starts on timeline <replaceable class="parameter">tli</>;
       otherwise, the server's current timeline is selected. The server can
       reply with an error, for example if the requested section of WAL has already
-      been recycled. On success, server responds with a CopyBothResponse
+      been recycled. On success, the server responds with a CopyBothResponse
       message, and then starts to stream WAL to the frontend.
      </para>
 
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml
index fd4e117de34..6e6787d8b50 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml
@@ -83,9 +83,8 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
     <listitem>
      <para>
       First, scan the directory where the WAL segment files are written and
-      find the newest completed segment file, using as starting point the
-      beginning of the next WAL segment file. This is calculated independently
-      on the compression method used to compress each segment.
+      find the newest completed segment file, using as the starting point the
+      beginning of the next WAL segment file.
      </para>
     </listitem>
 
@@ -93,7 +92,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
      <para>
       If a starting point cannot be calculated with the previous method,
       the latest WAL flush location is used as reported by the server from
-      a <literal>IDENTIFY_SYSTEM</literal> command.
+      an <literal>IDENTIFY_SYSTEM</literal> command.
      </para>
     </listitem>
    </orderedlist>


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