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commit 45f6fb2713feb21bc24fa907bad575008fd680ef
Author: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
Date: Thu May 10 17:47:49 2012 +0000
First released in: 9.2.0
Add comma after "Previously" as suggested by Josh Kupershmidt
doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml | 10 +++++-----
1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml
index ed8ce999fbb..fc477c84b0b 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- Previously supplied years and year masks of less than four digits
+ Previously, supplied years and year masks of less than four digits
wrapped inconsistently.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1010,7 +1010,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- Previously such not-valid-for-session errors would cause all
+ Previously, such not-valid-for-session errors would cause all
setting changes to be ignored by that backend.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1165,7 +1165,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- Previously the generic label <literal>?column?</> was used.
+ Previously, the generic label <literal>?column?</> was used.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1852,7 +1852,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- Previously default permissions generated <literal>NULL</> fields.
+ Previously, default permissions generated <literal>NULL</> fields.
(WAS IT NULL?)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2389,7 +2389,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- Previously libpq collected the entire query result into memory
+ Previously, libpq collected the entire query result into memory
before passing it back to the application.
</para>
</listitem>
[parent: a97207b6908f]