[Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>]

Hi everybody,


Being a technical writer, I attached a small patch that fixes minor 
language stuff.

Thank you.


Elena Indrupskaya

Postgres Professional Company

Moscow, Russia


On 09.05.2024 07:03, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> I have committed the first draft of the PG 17 release notes;  you can
> see the results here:
>
> 	https://momjian.us/pgsql_docs/release-17.html
>
> It will be improved until the final release.  The item count is 188,
> which is similar to recent releases:
>
> 	release-10:  189
> 	release-11:  170
> 	release-12:  180
> 	release-13:  178
> 	release-14:  220
> 	release-15:  184
> 	release-16:  206
> 	release-17:  188
>
> I welcome feedback.  For some reason it was an easier job than usual.
>

Attachments:

release_17.patch (text/x-patch, 2.2K) download
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
index 5a741ff16f..1ecf40fc73 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
 
 <listitem>
 <para>
-Restrict "ago" to only appear at the end of in interval values (Joseph Koshakow)
+Restrict "ago" to only appear at the end in interval values (Joseph Koshakow)
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ Author: Tomas Vondra <tomas.vondra@postgresql.org>
 
 <listitem>
 <para>
-Allow a BRIN indexes to be created using parallel workers (Tomas Vondra, Matthias van de Meent)
+Allow BRIN indexes to be created using parallel workers (Tomas Vondra, Matthias van de Meent)
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -941,7 +941,7 @@ Allow the creation of WAL summarization files (Robert Haas, Nathan Bossart, Hube
 </para>
 
 <para>
-These files record the block numbers that have changed within an LSN range, and is useful for incremental file system backups.  This is controlled by the server variables
+These files record the block numbers that have changed within an LSN range and are useful for incremental file system backups.  This is controlled by the server variables
 summarize_wal and wal_summarize_keep_time, and introspected with pg_available_wal_summaries(), pg_wal_summary_contents(), and pg_get_wal_summarizer_state().
 </para>
 </listitem>
@@ -1113,7 +1113,7 @@ Allow the application of logical replication changes to use hash indexes on the
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Previously only btree indexes could be use for this purpose.
+Previously only btree indexes could be used for this purpose.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -2185,7 +2185,7 @@ Allow pg_basebackup and pg_receivewal to use dbname in their connection specific
 </para>
 
 <para>
-This is useful for connection poolers who are sensitive to the database name.
+This is useful for connection poolers that are sensitive to the database name.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -2346,7 +2346,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
 
 <listitem>
 <para>
-Remove the Microsoft Visual Studio Studio-specific Postgres build option (Michael Paquier)
+Remove the Microsoft Visual Studio-specific Postgres build option (Michael Paquier)
 </para>
 
 <para>