[Elena Indrupskaya <e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru>]

Hello everyone,

I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14 
Release Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A 
patch to fix them is attached.
One of the replacements changes

"which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
"to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"

because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or 
just add a comma before "which").

-- 
Elena Indrupskaya
Lead Technical Writer
Postgres Professional http://www.postgrespro.comtext. 
<http://www.postgrespro.com;

Attachments:

rn_14_language.patch (text/x-patch, 1.7K) download
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
index ecd074361c6..4f0437f87d9 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ Author: Peter Geoghegan <pg@bowt.ie>
 
        <para>
         Reduce the default value of <xref
-        linkend="guc-vacuum-cost-page-miss"/> to better reflects current
+        linkend="guc-vacuum-cost-page-miss"/> to better reflect current
         hardware capabilities (Peter Geoghegan)
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -1441,7 +1441,7 @@ Author: Fujii Masao <fujii@postgresql.org>
        <para>
         Add system view <link
         linkend="monitoring-pg-stat-wal-view"><structname>pg_stat_wal</structname></link>
-        which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity (Masahiro Ikeda)
+        to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity (Masahiro Ikeda)
        </para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -1936,7 +1936,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
       </para>
 
       <para>
-       Previously these functions could only be executed by super-users,
+       Previously these functions could only be executed by superusers,
        and this is still the default.
       </para>
      </listitem>
@@ -2599,7 +2599,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
       </para>
 
       <para>
-       Floating point data types already supported these.
+       Floating-point data types already supported these.
       </para>
      </listitem>
 
@@ -2610,7 +2610,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
 -->
 
       <para>
-       Improve the accuracy of floating point computations involving
+       Improve the accuracy of floating-point computations involving
        infinity (Tom Lane)
       </para>
      </listitem>