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Subject: Re: PostgreSQL 14 press release draft
From: Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>
To: "Jonathan S. Katz" <jkatz@postgresql.org>, PostgreSQL Advocacy
	 <pgsql-advocacy@lists.postgresql.org>
Date: Tue, 21 Sep 2021 09:16:58 +0200
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On Mon, 2021-09-20 at 22:19 -0400, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
> The [extended systems](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/planner-stats.html#PLANNER-STATS-EXTENDED)
> includes many improvements in PostgreSQL 14, including the ability to apply
> extend statistics on expressions. Additionally,
> [window functions](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/functions-window.html) can
> now benefit from incremental sorts, a feature that was introduced in
> [PostgreSQL 13](https://www.postgresql.org/about/news/postgresql-13-released-2077/).

"The extended systems" sounds weird to me, and the link points to extended statistics.

Did you mean to say "Extended statistics include many ..."?
But then the repetition jars.

Perhaps:

  [Extended statistics](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/planner-stats.html#PLANNER-STATS-EXTENDED)
  can be used for expressions in PostgreSQL v14.  Additionally,
  [window functions](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/functions-window.html) can
  now benefit from incremental sorts, a feature that was introduced in
  [PostgreSQL 13](https://www.postgresql.org/about/news/postgresql-13-released-2077/).

Yours,
Laurenz Albe