Subject: Re: PostgreSQL 14 Beta 1 release announcement draft
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Le 18/05/2021 à 03:01, Jonathan S. Katz a écrit :
> On 5/17/21 10:15 AM, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> Please see the attached draft for the PostgreSQL 14 Beta 1 release
>> announcement this week.
> Thanks for the initial round of feedback! I have incorporated some of
> the suggestions directly, adapted some accordingly, and rejected ones
> that were either incorrect or personal preference (such as the editing
> process goes). Credit is given in the commit on the press repo.
>
> I have attached the current state of the draft.
>
> Again, please provide feedback no later than Wed, May 19 AoE[1].
>
> Thanks,
>
> Jonathan
>
> [1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anywhere_on_Earth

Hello,

I think the verb has been lost between first and second release of the draft:

    This release has significant improvements in transaction throughput for
    PostgreSQL systems that have large numbers of connections to the database,
    /regardless if they in an active or idle state./

S.
//

-- 
Dr Stéphane Schildknecht
Contact régional PostgreSQL pour l'Europe francophone
+33 617 11 37 42


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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Le 18/05/2021 à 03:01, Jonathan S. Katz
      a écrit :<br>
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      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">On 5/17/21 10:15 AM, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
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        <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">Hi,

Please see the attached draft for the PostgreSQL 14 Beta 1 release
announcement this week.
</pre>
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      <pre class="moz-quote-pre" wrap="">
Thanks for the initial round of feedback! I have incorporated some of
the suggestions directly, adapted some accordingly, and rejected ones
that were either incorrect or personal preference (such as the editing
process goes). Credit is given in the commit on the press repo.

I have attached the current state of the draft.

Again, please provide feedback no later than Wed, May 19 AoE[1].

Thanks,

Jonathan

[1] <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anywhere_on_Earth">https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anywhere_on_Earth</a>
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    <p><font face="Lato">Hello,</font></p>
    <p><font face="Lato">I think the verb has been lost between first
        and second release of the draft:</font></p>
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      <p>This release has significant improvements in transaction
        throughput for<br>
        PostgreSQL systems that have large numbers of connections to the
        database,<br>
        <i>regardless if they in an active or idle state.</i></p>
    </blockquote>
    <p>S.<br>
      <i></i></p>
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        <div><font color="#00aee6">Dr Stéphane Schildknecht</font></div>
        <div>Contact régional PostgreSQL pour l'Europe francophone</div>
        <div>+33 617 11 37 42</div>
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