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To: Jonathan S. Katz <[email protected]>
Cc: PostgreSQL Advocacy <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PostgreSQL 16 Beta 1 release announcement draft
Date: Sat, 20 May 2023 01:02:58 +1000
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On 2023-05-19 14:18, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
> Hi,
>
> Attached is a draft of the release announcement for PostgreSQL 16 Beta
> 1. The goal of this announcement is to get people excited about
> testing the beta and highlight many of the new features.
>
> Please review for inaccuracies, omissions, and other suggestions /
> errors.
Typo:
"PostgreSQL 16 continues to give users to the ability grant privileged
..."
Should be:
"PostgreSQL 16 continues to give users the ability to grant privileged
..."
Hmmm, upon re-reading that whole sentence (not just my fragment of it
above)
seems pretty unwieldy. A better one isn't springing to mind though. ;)
---
Should this:
"Additionally, starting with release, logical replication ..."
Have the word "this" before "release"?
---
Typo:
"... use the authenticated credentials to connected to other
services."
Should be:
"... use the authenticated credentials to connect to other services."
The sentence after that starts:
"This release also adds ..."
With the one following it starting with "This includes ...". Together,
they a bit unwieldy too. Maybe something like this instead?
"This release also adds several new security-oriented connection
parameters for clients, including ..."
---
Would this:
"You can now also set `sslrootcert` to `system` to specify that
PostgreSQL can use the trusted certificate authority (CA) store
for that operating system."
Be better as?
"You can now also set `sslrootcert` to `system` to instruct
PostgreSQL to use the trusted certificate authority (CA) store
provided by the operating system."
---
Nothing else is jumping out at me. It all seems pretty good. :)
+ Justin
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