--- 16beta1.md.orig	2023-05-20 21:12:11.193708177 +0200
+++ 16beta1.md	2023-05-20 21:19:52.954651807 +0200
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
 
 ### Developer Experience
 
-PostgreSQL 16 continues to to implement the [SQL/JSON](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/devel/functions-json.html)
+PostgreSQL 16 continues to implement the [SQL/JSON](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/devel/functions-json.html)
 standard for manipulating [JSON](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/devel/datatype-json.html)
 data, including support for SQL/JSON constructors (e.g. `JSON_ARRAY()`,
 `JSON_ARRAYAGG()` et al), and identity functions (`IS JSON`). This release also
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
 These include `pg_maintain`, which enables execution of operations such as
 `VACUUM`, `ANALYZE`, `REINDEX`, and others, and `pg_createsubscription`, which
 allows users to create a logical replication subscription. Additionally,
-starting with release, logical replication subscribers execute transactions on a
+starting with (this?) release, logical replication subscribers execute transactions on a
 table as the table owner, not the superuser.
 
 PostgreSQL 16 now lets you use regular expressions in the [`pg_hba.conf`](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/devel/auth-pg-hba-conf.html)
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
 ### Other Notable Changes
 
 For Windows installations, PostgreSQL 16 now supports a minimum version of
-Windows 10. Additionally, PostgreSQL 16 removes the `promote_trigger_file`
+Windows 10. <!-- Is it on Windows too ? -->Additionally, PostgreSQL 16 removes the `promote_trigger_file`
 option to enable the promotion of a standby. Users should use the
 `pg_ctl promote` command or `pg_promote()` function to promote a standby.