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From: Amit Kapila <amit.kapila16@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 18 May 2021 08:10:12 +0530
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Subject: Re: PostgreSQL 14 Beta 1 release announcement draft
To: "Jonathan S. Katz" <jkatz@postgresql.org>
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On Tue, May 18, 2021 at 6:31 AM Jonathan S. Katz <jkatz@postgresql.org> wrote:
>
> On 5/17/21 10:15 AM, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
> > Hi,
> >
> > Please see the attached draft for the PostgreSQL 14 Beta 1 release
> > announcement this week.
>
> Thanks for the initial round of feedback! I have incorporated some of
> the suggestions directly, adapted some accordingly, and rejected ones
> that were either incorrect or personal preference (such as the editing
> process goes). Credit is given in the commit on the press repo.
>
> I have attached the current state of the draft.
>

Few minor comments:

* and inspect replication slot statuses from the [`pg_stat_replication_slots`]
In the above sentence, do you want to say statistics instead of statuses?

* PostgreSQL 14 adds numerous performance benefits for logical
replication, including the ability to stream in-process transactions
I think in the above sentence, instead of in-process it should be in-progress

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With Regards,
Amit Kapila.