Subject: Re: PostgreSQL 14 Beta 1 release announcement draft
To: "Jonathan S. Katz" <jkatz@postgresql.org>,
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From: Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl>
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Date: Mon, 17 May 2021 17:01:47 +0200
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On 5/17/21 4:15 PM, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
> Please see the attached draft for the PostgreSQL 14 Beta 1 release
> announcement this week.

[..]

Here are a few changes:


when the `async_capable` flag is it.  should be:

when the `async_capable` flag is set.


can on foreign tables.   should be:
on foreign tables.


using the `JSONB` data type with,   should be:  
using the `JSONB` data type,


Admittedly I am not a native speaker but that I do not understand

'bubble' is perhaps reason to rephrase?


command in can now   should be:
command can now


Thank you,

Erik Rijkers