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Date: Wed, 21 Aug 2019 23:02:10 +0200
From: Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl>
To: "Jonathan S. Katz" <jkatz@postgresql.org>
Cc: PostgreSQL Advocacy <pgsql-advocacy@lists.postgresql.org>
Subject: Re: PostgreSQL 12 Press Release - First Draft
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On 2019-08-21 22:43, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Attached is a first draft of the press release for PostgreSQL 12.

A few typos:

'PostgreSQL 12 also improvements the performance of'  should be
'PostgreSQL 12 also improves the performance when'

'with blocking any queries'  should be (I think)
'without blocking any queries'

'write-head-log'  should be
'write-ahead-log'

'that can be computed its value from other columns'
'that can compute its value from other columns'

and something is not quite right about the sentence containing:
'LDAP servers using if it'
but I can't figure out what it should be.


thanks,


Erik Rijkers