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Subject: Re: Confusing names
From: Simon Riggs <simon@2ndquadrant.com>
To: Neil Conway <neilc@samurai.com>
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On Thu, 2005-10-20 at 17:59 -0400, Neil Conway wrote:
> On Thu, 2005-20-10 at 22:21 +0100, Simon Riggs wrote:
> > I like very much the split of that into two sections, but I think the
> > new chapter names are somewhat confusing.
> 
> Yeah, I wasn't really sure about how to name them myself.
> 
> > My proposal would be to rename the chapters called
> > 
> > 	Server Run-time Environment
> > 	Run-time Configuration
> > 
> > to be
> > 
> > 	Server and Operating System Environment
> > 	Server Configuration Parameters
> 
> IMHO "Operating System Environment" and "Server Configuration" would be
> more concise.

Works for me. 

Feeling patchy?

Best Regards, Simon Riggs