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From: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
To: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
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Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> writes:
> On Fri, Jun 23, 2023 at 09:16:39PM -0400, Tom Lane wrote:
>> I think this sentence is formally correct, but it is not very hard to
>> misparse.  Maybe a bit of re-ordering would help?  Like
>> ... it never sees either uncommitted data or changes committed by
>> concurrent transactions during the query's execution.

> Sure.

Done that way.

			regards, tom lane