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* Re: Change JOIN tutorial to focus more on explicit joins
@ 2020-07-17 23:48  Thomas Munro <thomas.munro@gmail.com>
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From: Thomas Munro @ 2020-07-17 23:48 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Jürgen Purtz <juergen@purtz.de>; +Cc: shammat@gmx.net; pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org

On Wed, May 27, 2020 at 8:29 PM Jürgen Purtz <juergen@purtz.de> wrote:
> > The "new" syntax is 28 years old, from SQL 92.  I don't see too many
> > SQL 86 joins.  Would you like to write a documentation patch?
> >
> >
> The attached patch
>
> - prefers the explicit join-syntax over the implicit one and explains
> the keywords of the explicit syntax
>
> - uses a more accurate definition of 'join'
>
> - separates <programlisting> and <screen> tags
>
> - shifts <indexterm> definitions outside of <para> to get a better
> rendering in PDF
>
> - adds a note concerning IDs and foreign keys

Hi Jürgen,

Please add to the commitfest app, so we don't lose track of it.





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* Connection Info
@ 2024-05-05 20:25  PG Doc comments form <noreply@postgresql.org>
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 5+ messages in thread

From: PG Doc comments form @ 2024-05-05 20:25 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; +Cc: k.man.113@gmail.com

The following documentation comment has been logged on the website:

Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/server-start.html
Description:

Hello!

On this page:
https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/server-start.html#CLIENT-CONNECTION-PROBLEMS

It notes: ".... A common mistake is to forget to configure the server to
allow TCP/IP connections."

I would expect a hyperlink to a section explaining exactly HOW to "configure
the server to allow TCP/IP connections" - from that note text.


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* Re: Connection Info
@ 2024-05-06 14:15  Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>
  parent: PG Doc comments form <noreply@postgresql.org>
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 5+ messages in thread

From: Laurenz Albe @ 2024-05-06 14:15 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: k.man.113@gmail.com; pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org

On Sun, 2024-05-05 at 20:25 +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
> On this page:
> https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/server-start.html#CLIENT-CONNECTION-PROBLEMS
> 
> It notes: ".... A common mistake is to forget to configure the server to
> allow TCP/IP connections."
> 
> I would expect a hyperlink to a section explaining exactly HOW to "configure
> the server to allow TCP/IP connections" - from that note text.

I agree.

Perhaps it should say:

  A common mistake is to forget to configure "listen_addresses" so that the
  server accepts remote TCP connections.

Then "listen_addresses" could hyperlink to the parameter's documentation.

Yours,
Laurenz Albe





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* Re: Connection Info
@ 2024-10-17 01:36  Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
  parent: Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 5+ messages in thread

From: Bruce Momjian @ 2024-10-17 01:36 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>; +Cc: k.man.113@gmail.com; pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org

On Mon, May  6, 2024 at 04:15:24PM +0200, Laurenz Albe wrote:
> On Sun, 2024-05-05 at 20:25 +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
> > On this page:
> > https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/server-start.html#CLIENT-CONNECTION-PROBLEMS
> > 
> > It notes: ".... A common mistake is to forget to configure the server to
> > allow TCP/IP connections."
> > 
> > I would expect a hyperlink to a section explaining exactly HOW to "configure
> > the server to allow TCP/IP connections" - from that note text.
> 
> I agree.
> 
> Perhaps it should say:
> 
>   A common mistake is to forget to configure "listen_addresses" so that the
>   server accepts remote TCP connections.
> 
> Then "listen_addresses" could hyperlink to the parameter's documentation.

Agreed, patch attached.

-- 
  Bruce Momjian  <bruce@momjian.us>        https://momjian.us
  EDB                                      https://enterprisedb.com

  When a patient asks the doctor, "Am I going to die?", he means 
  "Am I going to die soon?"

Attachments:

  [text/x-diff] listen.diff (659B, ../../ZxBqAJ37NmchyvVI@momjian.us/2-listen.diff)
  download | inline diff:
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/runtime.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/runtime.sgml
index 2c4d5ef640d..933cac813c2 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/runtime.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/runtime.sgml
@@ -637,7 +637,8 @@ psql: error: connection to server at "server.joe.com" (123.123.123.123), port 54
      This is the generic <quote>I couldn't find a server to talk
      to</quote> failure. It looks like the above when TCP/IP
      communication is attempted. A common mistake is to forget to
-     configure the server to allow TCP/IP connections.
+     configure <xref linkend="guc-listen-addresses"/> so that the server
+     accepts remote TCP connections.
     </para>
 
     <para>

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* Re: Connection Info
@ 2024-11-01 17:14  Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
  parent: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 5+ messages in thread

From: Bruce Momjian @ 2024-11-01 17:14 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>; +Cc: k.man.113@gmail.com; pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org

On Wed, Oct 16, 2024 at 09:36:00PM -0400, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> On Mon, May  6, 2024 at 04:15:24PM +0200, Laurenz Albe wrote:
> > On Sun, 2024-05-05 at 20:25 +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
> > > On this page:
> > > https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/server-start.html#CLIENT-CONNECTION-PROBLEMS
> > > 
> > > It notes: ".... A common mistake is to forget to configure the server to
> > > allow TCP/IP connections."
> > > 
> > > I would expect a hyperlink to a section explaining exactly HOW to "configure
> > > the server to allow TCP/IP connections" - from that note text.
> > 
> > I agree.
> > 
> > Perhaps it should say:
> > 
> >   A common mistake is to forget to configure "listen_addresses" so that the
> >   server accepts remote TCP connections.
> > 
> > Then "listen_addresses" could hyperlink to the parameter's documentation.
> 
> Agreed, patch attached.

Patch applied.

-- 
  Bruce Momjian  <bruce@momjian.us>        https://momjian.us
  EDB                                      https://enterprisedb.com

  When a patient asks the doctor, "Am I going to die?", he means 
  "Am I going to die soon?"





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