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From: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
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Subject: Re: [PATCH] doc/queries.sgml: add missing comma
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Drew DeVault <sir@cmpwn.com> writes:
> Minor grammatical fix.

Hmm, I'm not sure that reads any better than before.

>     <para>
> -    Strictly speaking, this process is iteration not recursion, but
> +    Strictly speaking, this process is iteration, not recursion, but
>      <literal>RECURSIVE</literal> is the terminology chosen by the SQL s=
tandards

... although I think this text is mine, so naturally I'd think
that.  Anyone else have an opinion?

			regards, tom lane