Received: from localhost (unknown [200.46.204.183]) by mail.postgresql.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B22E4633BED for ; Fri, 24 Apr 2009 17:31:26 -0300 (ADT) Received: from mail.postgresql.org ([200.46.204.86]) by localhost (mx1.hub.org [200.46.204.183]) (amavisd-maia, port 10024) with ESMTP id 46482-08 for ; Fri, 24 Apr 2009 17:31:25 -0300 (ADT) X-Greylist: from auto-whitelisted by SQLgrey-1.7.6 Received: from momjian.us (momjian.us [70.90.9.53]) by mail.postgresql.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 05320633BD9 for ; Fri, 24 Apr 2009 17:31:22 -0300 (ADT) Received: (from bruce@localhost) by momjian.us (8.11.6/8.11.6) id n3OKVNG09905 for pgsql-docs@postgresql.org; Fri, 24 Apr 2009 16:31:23 -0400 (EDT) From: Bruce Momjian Message-Id: <200904242031.n3OKVNG09905@momjian.us> Subject: Proofreading the documentation In-Reply-To: To: PostgreSQL-documentation Date: Fri, 24 Apr 2009 16:31:23 -0400 (EDT) X-Mailer: ELM [version 2.4ME+ PL124 (25)] MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Type: text/plain; charset="US-ASCII" X-Virus-Scanned: Maia Mailguard 1.0.1 X-Spam-Status: No, hits=0 tagged_above=0 required=5 tests=none X-Spam-Level: X-Archive-Number: 200904/49 X-Sequence-Number: 5137 [ resent without large attachment] I mentioned on my blog that I am proofreading our documentation: http://momjian.us/main/blogs/pgblog.html#April_22_2009 I have gotten through the first two parts (Tutorial, SQL Language), and have have created the following patch (diff -u, clearer for single-line changes): ftp://momjian.us/pub/postgresql/mypatches/docs I found our documentation to be very good. I made an average of two changes per PDF page, and 95% of those were just wording improvements, not problems in accuracy or even clarity. I am only 20% through the docs. I will take a break now and work on pg_migrator. -- Bruce Momjian http://momjian.us EnterpriseDB http://enterprisedb.com + If your life is a hard drive, Christ can be your backup. +