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From: Bruce Momjian <[email protected]>
To: Bruce Momjian <[email protected]>
Cc: PostgreSQL-documentation <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: Proofreading the documentation
Date: Mon, 27 Apr 2009 12:45:23 -0400 (EDT)
Message-ID: <[email protected]> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <[email protected]>

Bruce Momjian wrote:
> [ resent without large attachment]
> 
> I mentioned on my blog that I am proofreading our documentation:
> 
> 	http://momjian.us/main/blogs/pgblog.html#April_22_2009
> 
> I have gotten through the first two parts (Tutorial, SQL Language), and
> have have created the following patch (diff -u, clearer for single-line
> changes):
> 
> 	ftp://momjian.us/pub/postgresql/mypatches/docs
> 
> I found our documentation to be very good. I made an average of two
> changes per PDF page, and 95% of those were just wording improvements,
> not problems in accuracy or even clarity.
> 
> I am only 20% through the docs.  I will take a break now and work on
> pg_migrator.
> 

Applied.

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  Bruce Momjian  <[email protected]>        http://momjian.us
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