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From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
To: Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl>
Cc: pgsql-docs@postgresql.org
Subject: Re: readability tutorial example in pdf
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On Sat, May  4, 2013 at 11:00:26PM +0200, Erik Rijkers wrote:
> The attached patch breaks code-example into two lines.
> 
> In the pdf (A4) version this line is truncated by several words, making a tutorial example
> incomprehensible.
> 
> (The line-break also shows up in the html vrsion but does not look particularly ugly there)

Agreed.  I ended up splitting it into three lines;  applied patch
attached.

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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml
new file mode 100644
index 3c067d5..1e45511
*** a/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml
--- b/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml
*************** SELECT depname, empno, salary, avg(salar
*** 389,395 ****
      order in which the rows are output.)  Here is an example:
  
  <programlisting>
! SELECT depname, empno, salary, rank() OVER (PARTITION BY depname ORDER BY salary DESC) FROM empsalary;
  </programlisting>
  
  <screen>
--- 389,397 ----
      order in which the rows are output.)  Here is an example:
  
  <programlisting>
! SELECT depname, empno, salary,
!        rank() OVER (PARTITION BY depname ORDER BY salary DESC)
! FROM empsalary;
  </programlisting>
  
  <screen>

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