Date: Thu, 23 Jun 2016 09:24:33 -0400
From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
To: Dmitry Igrishin <dmitigr@gmail.com>
Cc: pgsql-docs <pgsql-docs@postgresql.org>
Subject: Re: startup message -> StartupMessage
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On Thu, Jun 23, 2016 at 07:47:10AM +0300, Dmitry Igrishin wrote:
> 2016-06-23 1:53 GMT+03:00 Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>:
> > On Thu, Jun  9, 2016 at 03:38:40PM +0300, Dmitry Igrishin wrote:
> >> Hi,
> >>
> >> At https://www.postgresql.org/docs/9.6/static/protocol-flow.html
> >> The StartupMessage instead of "startup message" may looks better for
> >> the reader (at least for me).
> >
> > Uh, where exactly?  Here?
> I suggest everywhere on this page.
> >
> >         To begin a session, a frontend opens a connection to the server and
> >         sends a startup message.
> >
> > In that case, it is highlighting it is a startup message, not the exact
> > message identifier.
> Yes, but see the next sentence: "This message includes the names of
> the user and of the database the user wants to connect to; it also
> identifies the particular protocol version to be used." So, it's about
> the StartupMessage exactly.

OK, how is this attached doc patch?

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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
new file mode 100644
index 9c96d8f..04d6780
*** a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
--- b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
***************
*** 93,99 ****
     length of the rest of the message (this length count includes itself, but
     not the message-type byte).  The remaining contents of the message are
     determined by the message type.  For historical reasons, the very first
!    message sent by the client (the startup message) has no initial
     message-type byte.
    </para>
  
--- 93,99 ----
     length of the rest of the message (this length count includes itself, but
     not the message-type byte).  The remaining contents of the message are
     determined by the message type.  For historical reasons, the very first
!    message sent by the client (StartupMessage) has no initial
     message-type byte.
    </para>
  
***************
*** 213,221 ****
  
     <para>
      To begin a session, a frontend opens a connection to the server and sends
!     a startup message.  This message includes the names of the user and of the
      database the user wants to connect to; it also identifies the particular
!     protocol version to be used.  (Optionally, the startup message can include
      additional settings for run-time parameters.)
      The server then uses this information and
      the contents of its configuration files (such as
--- 213,222 ----
  
     <para>
      To begin a session, a frontend opens a connection to the server and sends
!     a startup message (StartupMessage).  This message includes the names
!     of the user and of the
      database the user wants to connect to; it also identifies the particular
!     protocol version to be used.  (Optionally, StartupMessage can include
      additional settings for run-time parameters.)
      The server then uses this information and
      the contents of its configuration files (such as

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