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Date: Wed, 21 Mar 2018 22:52:09 +0900 (JST)
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To: pgsql-docs@postgresql.org
Subject: protocol.sgml typo?
From: Tatsuo Ishii <ishii@sraoss.co.jp>
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For me it seems there's a typo in protocol.sgml. I am not an English
native speaker and I might be wrong though.

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
index 4fd61d7..366b684 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
@@ -5784,7 +5784,7 @@ StartupMessage (F)
 </varlistentry>
 </variablelist>
 
-                In addition to the above, others parameter may be listed.
+                In addition to the above, other parameters may be listed.
                 Parameter names beginning with <literal>_pq_.</literal> are
                 reserved for use as protocol extensions, while others are
                 treated as run-time parameters to be set at backend start

Best regards,
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Tatsuo Ishii
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