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Drake" Cc: Erik Rijkers , Stephen Frost , pgsql-docs Subject: Re: readability changes to postgres.sgml Message-ID: <20190820050530.GC1841@paquier.xyz> References: <5ac2c96d-37a6-18aa-08c4-327a6fbff24b@commandprompt.com> <20190816002623.GS16436@tamriel.snowman.net> <996bcfe233f558276f4f5962673ba164@xs4all.nl> <317b2dec-264b-2085-fc9c-10f2feca3693@commandprompt.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="i7F3eY7HS/tUJxUd" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <317b2dec-264b-2085-fc9c-10f2feca3693@commandprompt.com> List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Precedence: bulk --i7F3eY7HS/tUJxUd Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline On Mon, Aug 19, 2019 at 04:00:13PM -0700, Joshua D. Drake wrote: > New version attached with spelling errors fixed. I have gone through this patch, and I have a hard time understanding why these are improvements over the existing wording. In what does this make things better? -- Michael --i7F3eY7HS/tUJxUd Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iQIzBAABCgAdFiEEG72nH6vTowiyblFKnvQgOdbyQH0FAl1bf5oACgkQnvQgOdby QH1Ytg//fsjCJAUra7fTYty5JhJ164hpsnlEFt3zOBmvKoZBPiRvSVmrw1R/PPe5 B6dWDjB4GurGP12T6inUXG5yiaz2c8/+Z0axXVwOUX6tG8HKnhjWpiaa+9/DnmVi 0Q8B/0qrJC6+FH9lfTpWMFFXfLbAw4KQiWnbC8OAE606D4ABBgvwUTIb5fLiMxmY 7ZeDWl04rE8vDqPeQ+1SCBT4qE8aYpkHuTJYf7l4Ugr+/XJwGXCyB6ajIG6Jc8mS OSo3ir/AW0oQYcM7J1nSrEYV0HJ1+widfQyq6hlTPropD+YNAHqJWi9fLs0YvFCT 1qLGDt/0SJVeCUy4WR+vsT6PfpZgLkIV6Im3LsEcq6RjOY8YVikZ5841PAoMz+dc cH7aTzsb2PpH5C3EvuMooECf4Bm1475B0emgNhufPGdshTM4+Yf02kIMgpJZGbSg ge9XdN1fBbEDHi5MXtyeMvJaza2JMdPj3ACDJXUCftgolBJtF2PfflATw0sGrYkw 7j2Xd+iWu/80n7DrabtMrk/FTPBGIImngOoMCiDNht6O+yBHTeVNeZnpLMCqzSEH ZdypW/41SziKmj5fSwJPGTnfSJefgABGfrWLhBuuhc3Yo5pyKstG+HiuPATaZaQG 4kWtCYdKu4eBp2u9wqLeUIeQm2te8WvzPKmi00+ezBSo/reGkpA= =aY3D -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --i7F3eY7HS/tUJxUd--