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* fix tags in v12 Release Notes
@ 2019-09-23 12:23 Liudmila Mantrova <l.mantrova@gmail.com>
2019-09-23 14:42 ` Re: fix tags in v12 Release Notes Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
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From: Liudmila Mantrova @ 2019-09-23 12:23 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: pgsql-docs
Hi,
Please consider fixing a couple of tagging issues in v12 Release notes
discovered during translation. A trivial patch is attached.
--
Best regards,
Liudmila Mantrova
Technical writer at Postgres Professional: http://www.postgrespro.com
Attachments:
release-12-tags.patch (application/x-patch, 6.4K) download
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
index 129787b4c9..19f08cdb7b 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
@@ -608,7 +608,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
<para>
Treat object-name columns in
the <link linkend="information-schema"><structname>information_schema</structname></link>
- views as being of type <type>name</type> not <type>varchar</type>
+ views as being of type <type>name</type>, not <type>varchar</type>
(Tom Lane)
</para>
@@ -969,7 +969,7 @@ Author: Heikki Linnakangas <heikki.linnakangas@iki.fi>
<para>
Reduce the <acronym>WAL</acronym> write overhead
- of <acronym>GiST</acronym>, <acronym>GIN</acronym> and
+ of <acronym>GiST</acronym>, <acronym>GIN</acronym>, and
<acronym>SP-GiST</acronym> index creation (Anastasia Lubennikova,
Andrey V. Lepikhov)
</para>
@@ -1288,7 +1288,7 @@ Author: Stephen Frost <sfrost@snowman.net>
-->
<para>
- Allow <link linkend="storage-toast"><literal>TOASTed</literal></link>
+ Allow <link linkend="storage-toast">toasted</link>
values to be minimally decompressed (Paul Ramsey)
</para>
@@ -1305,7 +1305,7 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rhaas@postgresql.org>
-->
<para>
- Allow <link linkend="sql-altertable"><command>ALTER TABLE .. SET
+ Allow <link linkend="sql-altertable"><command>ALTER TABLE ... SET
NOT NULL</command></link> to avoid unnecessary table scans (Sergei
Kornilov)
</para>
@@ -1323,7 +1323,7 @@ Author: Noah Misch <noah@leadboat.com>
-->
<para>
- Allow <command>ALTER TABLE .. SET DATA TYPE</command> changing between
+ Allow <command>ALTER TABLE ... SET DATA TYPE</command> changing between
<type>timestamp</type> and <type>timestamptz</type> to avoid a
table rewrite when the session time zone is <acronym>UTC</acronym>
(Noah Misch)
@@ -1438,7 +1438,7 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter@eisentraut.org>
<para>
Progress is reported in the <link
linkend="create-index-progress-reporting"><structname>pg_stat_progress_create_index</structname></link>
- system view
+ system view.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2235,7 +2235,7 @@ Author: Tomas Vondra <tomas.vondra@postgresql.org>
</para>
<para>
- This output can also be obtained in <xref linkend="auto-explain"/>
+ This output can also be obtained when using <xref linkend="auto-explain"/>
by setting <varname>auto_explain.log_settings</varname>.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2620,7 +2620,8 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
<para>
Add connection parameter <xref linkend="libpq-tcp-user-timeout"/>
- to control libpq's <acronym>TCP</acronym> timeout (Ryohei Nagaura)
+ to control <application>libpq</application>'s <acronym>TCP</acronym>
+ timeout (Ryohei Nagaura)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2631,9 +2632,9 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
-->
<para>
- Allow libpq (and thus psql) to report only
- the <literal>SQLSTATE</literal> value in error messages (Didier
- Gautheron)
+ Allow <application>libpq</application> (and thus
+ <application>psql</application>) to report only the
+ <literal>SQLSTATE</literal> value in error messages (Didier Gautheron)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2644,7 +2645,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
-->
<para>
- Add libpq
+ Add <application>libpq</application>
function <link linkend="libpq-pqresultmemorysize"><function>PQresultMemorySize()</function></link>
to report the memory used by a query result (Lars Kanis, Tom Lane)
</para>
@@ -2657,7 +2658,7 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter_e@gmx.net>
-->
<para>
- Remove the no-display/debug flag from libpq's
+ Remove the no-display/debug flag from <application>libpq</application>'s
<literal>options</literal> connection parameter (Peter Eisentraut)
</para>
@@ -2729,8 +2730,8 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
-->
<para>
- Allow vacuumdb to disable waiting for locks or skipping all-visible
- pages (Nathan Bossart)
+ Allow <xref linkend="app-vacuumdb"/> to disable waiting for locks
+ or skipping all-visible pages (Nathan Bossart)
</para>
<para>
@@ -2835,9 +2836,12 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
-->
<para>
- Improve tab completion of <command>CREATE TABLE, CREATE TRIGGER,
- CREATE EVENT TRIGGER, ANALYZE, EXPLAIN, VACUUM, ALTER TABLE,
- ALTER INDEX, ALTER DATABASE, ALTER INDEX ALTER COLUMN</command>
+ Improve tab completion of <command>CREATE TABLE</command>,
+ <command>CREATE TRIGGER</command>, <command>CREATE EVENT TRIGGER</command>,
+ <command>ANALYZE</command>, <command>EXPLAIN</command>,
+ <command>VACUUM</command>, <command>ALTER TABLE</command>,
+ <command>ALTER INDEX</command>, <command>ALTER DATABASE</command>,
+ and <command>ALTER INDEX ALTER COLUMN</command>
(Dagfinn Ilmari Mannsåker, Tatsuro Yamada, Michaël Paquier,
Tom Lane, Justin Pryzby)
</para>
@@ -2878,8 +2882,8 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
-->
<para>
- Improve precision of pgbench's <option>--rate</option>
- option (Tom Lane)
+ Improve precision of <application>pgbench</application>'s
+ <option>--rate</option> option (Tom Lane)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2889,8 +2893,8 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter_e@gmx.net>
2018-10-15 [5b75a4f82] pgbench: Report errors during run better
-->
<para>
- Improve pgbench's error reporting with clearer messages and return
- codes (Peter Eisentraut)
+ Improve <application>pgbench</application>'s error reporting with
+ clearer messages and return codes (Peter Eisentraut)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -3160,7 +3164,7 @@ existin
<para>
This enables the development of new <link linkend="tableam">table
access methods</link>, which can optimize storage for different
- use-cases. The existing <literal>heap</literal> access method
+ use cases. The existing <literal>heap</literal> access method
remains the default.
</para>
</listitem>
* Re: fix tags in v12 Release Notes
2019-09-23 12:23 fix tags in v12 Release Notes Liudmila Mantrova <l.mantrova@gmail.com>
@ 2019-09-23 14:42 ` Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
2019-09-28 20:32 ` Re: fix tags in v12 Release Notes Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
0 siblings, 1 reply; 3+ messages in thread
From: Tom Lane @ 2019-09-23 14:42 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Liudmila Mantrova <l.mantrova@gmail.com>; +Cc: pgsql-docs
Liudmila Mantrova <l.mantrova@gmail.com> writes:
> Please consider fixing a couple of tagging issues in v12 Release notes
> discovered during translation. A trivial patch is attached.
I pushed most of this. I did tweak where the link for vacuumdb
went --- I think Bruce's usual practice is to put a <link> only
on the first reference to a program or function, when there are
several close together.
Thanks for the fixes!
regards, tom lane
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* Re: fix tags in v12 Release Notes
2019-09-23 12:23 fix tags in v12 Release Notes Liudmila Mantrova <l.mantrova@gmail.com>
2019-09-23 14:42 ` Re: fix tags in v12 Release Notes Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
@ 2019-09-28 20:32 ` Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
0 siblings, 0 replies; 3+ messages in thread
From: Bruce Momjian @ 2019-09-28 20:32 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>; +Cc: Liudmila Mantrova <l.mantrova@gmail.com>; pgsql-docs
On Mon, Sep 23, 2019 at 10:42:32AM -0400, Tom Lane wrote:
> Liudmila Mantrova <l.mantrova@gmail.com> writes:
> > Please consider fixing a couple of tagging issues in v12 Release notes
> > discovered during translation. A trivial patch is attached.
>
> I pushed most of this. I did tweak where the link for vacuumdb
> went --- I think Bruce's usual practice is to put a <link> only
> on the first reference to a program or function, when there are
> several close together.
Yes, that is true --- the link is added to the first mention of the term
in that section.
> Thanks for the fixes!
Yes, very nice.
--
Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> http://momjian.us
EnterpriseDB http://enterprisedb.com
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