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> On Thu, 2019-11-21 at 09:08 +0900, Tatsuo Ishii wrote:
>> I just want to make sure that if I understand correctly what $subject says. In the file:
>> 
>>      The previous <command>initdb</command> step should have told you how to
>>      start up the database server. Do so now. The command should look
>>      something like:
>> 
>> I think "previous <command>initdb</command> step" means the actual
>> execution of initdb command, rather than it refers to the description
>> about initdb in the previous section of the doc.
>> 
>> In another word, "previous step should have told you how to start up
>> the database server" referes to the message from initdb:
>> 
>> Success. You can now start the database server using:
>> 
>>     pg_ctl -D data -l logfile start
>> 
>> Am I correct?
> 
> Right.
> 
> Maybe it were better to write:
> 
>   The output from the previous <command>initdb</command> step should have told you

Thanks. That's much clearer to me.

Best regards,
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Tatsuo Ishii
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