Date: Sun, 08 Dec 2019 11:51:01 +0900 (JST)
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Subject: Re: Typo in perform.sgml?
From: Tatsuo Ishii <ishii@sraoss.co.jp>
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> I wrote:
>> Actually, that whole para could do with a rewrite; whoever wrote
>> it was obviously not familiar with Strunk & White's dictum
>> "Omit needless words".
> 
> Looking closer, there were also some unnecessary inconsistencies with
> the rest of the section, such as use of "records" rather than "rows",
> and different markup choices.  I propose the attached ... it's
> actually a bit longer than the original, but that's because it
> offers more details.

Thanks for looking into this. The patch looks much cleaner than
before.

Best regards,
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Tatsuo Ishii
SRA OSS, Inc. Japan
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