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Message-ID: <20200413005729.GC2169@paquier.xyz> References: <158654352583.25698.11991707283132945859@wrigleys.postgresql.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="yudcn1FV7Hsu/q59" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <158654352583.25698.11991707283132945859@wrigleys.postgresql.org> List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Precedence: bulk --yudcn1FV7Hsu/q59 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Fri, Apr 10, 2020 at 06:32:05PM +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote: > On Linux and POSIX platforms checkpoint_flush_after allows to force the OS > that pages written by the checkpoint should be flushed to disk after a > configurable number of bytes.=20 >=20 > I think I have an idea what it says, but saw some discussion to this very > issue. Can it be re-written? 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