Date: Sat, 31 Oct 2020 16:34:44 -0500
From: Justin Pryzby <pryzby@telsasoft.com>
To: Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl>
Cc: =?iso-8859-1?Q?J=FCrgen?= Purtz <juergen@purtz.de>,
	"David G. Johnston" <david.g.johnston@gmail.com>,
	pgsql-hackers@lists.postgresql.org
Subject: Re: Additional Chapter for Tutorial
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On Fri, Oct 30, 2020 at 05:45:00PM +0100, Erik Rijkers wrote:
> On 2020-10-30 11:57, Jürgen Purtz wrote:
> > On 26.10.20 15:53, David G. Johnston wrote:
> > > Removing -docs as moderation won’t let me cross-post.
> > > 
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I applied 0009-architecture-vs-master.patch to head
> and went through architecture.sgml (only that file),
> then produced the attached .diff

Now I applied 0009 as well as Erik's changes and made some more of my own :)

I'm including all patches so CFBOT is happy.

> 3.
> 'accesses' seems a somewhat strange word most of the time just 'access' may
> be better.  Not sure - native speaker wanted. (no changes made)

You're right, and I included that part.

-- 
Justin

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