Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1mWTTp-0008KG-N2 for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Sat, 02 Oct 2021 01:06:21 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1mWTTn-0007fF-Cb for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Sat, 02 Oct 2021 01:06:19 +0000 Received: from makus.postgresql.org ([2001:4800:3e1:1::229]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1mWTTm-0007f5-Rj for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Sat, 02 Oct 2021 01:06:19 +0000 Received: from resqmta-ch2-02v.sys.comcast.net ([2001:558:fe21:29:69:252:207:34]) by makus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1mWTTf-00058d-Jo for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Sat, 02 Oct 2021 01:06:17 +0000 Received: from resomta-ch2-20v.sys.comcast.net ([69.252.207.116]) by resqmta-ch2-02v.sys.comcast.net with ESMTP id WTClmH6szGhhbWTTcmp3QL; Sat, 02 Oct 2021 01:06:08 +0000 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=comcast.net; s=20190202a; t=1633136768; bh=fgcHDiGRWQFaFhKS9LOmNDbD86BcvaphWZ1TCXp8UV0=; h=Received:Received:Received:Date:From:To:Subject:Message-ID: MIME-Version:Content-Type; b=33xZkedU+VWxxX/Hsr+vm/62YxH6+U6A9gSbNCcHUM9E5EjVlPk4btr1h1YrWpbcm GdCNPotxumC2grslWneFdWffpjxsnieMMtQr0kf/GNOx8iIgbrh8q7u1UfTb87Fgud GO7javN04swsv8KY3L1OoDrBCo6oh5Bpq5Owzul5RbFBaFVBuMyZeXJt6QQLbDNvK1 /M3aU0582aDs4Ct1sux32U79ZjW7QSC0ZbMFXi4x7Yx/3PEtb0AaQSBrtYg+mSCHIb chYd+1UMQyDWMLU4LDKQYuytXN5m0jXl9TGdhFBlJF/q2k763A7Km60+QF/z2OqpBJ zRn0xLBzTXjvg== Received: from shrew ([66.30.144.167]) by resomta-ch2-20v.sys.comcast.net with ESMTPA id WTTamxgOFZd7yWTTcm2SXu; Sat, 02 Oct 2021 01:06:08 +0000 X-Xfinity-VAAS: gggruggvucftvghtrhhoucdtuddrgedvtddrudekjedggeduucetufdoteggodetrfdotffvucfrrhhofhhilhgvmecuvehomhgtrghsthdqtfgvshhipdfqfgfvpdfpqffurfetoffkrfenuceurghilhhouhhtmecufedtudenucenucfjughrpeffhffvuffkgggtuggfsehmtderredtredvnecuhfhrohhmpehrihhruceorhhirhgrnhhssegtohhmtggrshhtrdhnvghtqeenucggtffrrghtthgvrhhnpeekuedvteetfedvhefhieffveeigefggeevtdejjeehuedtudfhueetgefhudeiieenucfkphepieeirdeftddrudeggedrudeijeenucevlhhushhtvghrufhiiigvpedtnecurfgrrhgrmhephhgvlhhopehshhhrvgifpdhinhgvthepieeirdeftddrudeggedrudeijedpmhgrihhlfhhrohhmpehrihhrrghnshestghomhgtrghsthdrnhgvthdprhgtphhtthhopehpghhsqhhlqdguohgtsheslhhishhtshdrphhoshhtghhrvghsqhhlrdhorhhg X-Xfinity-VMeta: sc=0.00;st=legit Received: from rir by shrew with local (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1mWTTa-00044r-Nz for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Fri, 01 Oct 2021 21:06:06 -0400 Date: Fri, 1 Oct 2021 21:06:06 -0400 From: rir To: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org Subject: small patch Message-ID: <20211001163938.ifg4ayrsjwd7r6zr@localhost> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="dcdxmst5yhs7tqsg" Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: NeoMutt/20180716 List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Archived-At: Precedence: bulk --dcdxmst5yhs7tqsg Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Minor changes to move.sgml and fetch.sgml. The text 'or empty' is inconsistent by restating what the synopsis notation has expressed. The comments on sharing a language feature, while likely helpful during review, seem verbose compared to the non-commenting in other similar files. Thanks again, Rob --dcdxmst5yhs7tqsg Content-Type: text/x-diff; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="empty.patch" :From a297377ad3b760f10e951cf67ad0cea704214f34 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: rir Date: Wed, 29 Sep 2021 19:06:01 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] "empty or" is unusual and redundant --- doc/src/sgml/ref/fetch.sgml | 4 ++-- doc/src/sgml/ref/move.sgml | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/fetch.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/fetch.sgml index ec843f5684..e76b6fc69d 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/fetch.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/fetch.sgml @@ -25,11 +25,11 @@ PostgreSQL documentation - + FETCH [ direction [ FROM | IN ] ] cursor_name -where direction can be empty or one of: +where direction can one of: NEXT PRIOR diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/move.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/move.sgml index 4c7d1dca39..1ed06e4c9a 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/move.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/move.sgml @@ -25,11 +25,11 @@ PostgreSQL documentation - + MOVE [ direction [ FROM | IN ] ] cursor_name -where direction can be empty or one of: +where direction can one of: NEXT PRIOR -- 2.20.1 --dcdxmst5yhs7tqsg--