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* 9.1 release notes corrections
@ 2011-03-20 11:57 Thom Brown <thom@linux.com>
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From: Thom Brown @ 2011-03-20 11:57 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: pgsql-docs
Hi,
I attach a patch to address various errata in the PostgreSQL 9.1 release notes.
Thanks
--
Thom Brown
Twitter: @darkixion
IRC (freenode): dark_ixion
Registered Linux user: #516935
EnterpriseDB UK: http://www.enterprisedb.com
The Enterprise PostgreSQL Company
Attachments:
9.1_release_notes_fixes.patch (application/octet-stream, 4.3K) download
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.1.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.1.sgml
index c293e80..3f96239 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.1.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.1.sgml
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
<para>
Change <link
linkend="array-functions-table"><function>string_to_array()</></link>
- to return an empty array for for a zero-length string (Pavel
+ to return an empty array for a zero-length string (Pavel
Stehule)
</para>
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>
- Require superuser or <literal>CREATEROLE</> permissions to
+ Require superuser or <literal>CREATEROLE</> permissions in order to
set role comments (Tom Lane)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -333,9 +333,9 @@
<para>
This is a read-only permission used for streaming replication
- and allows non-super users to initiate replication connections.
- Previously only super-users could initiate replication
- connections; super-users have this permission by default.
+ and allows non-superusers to initiate replication connections.
+ Previously only superusers could initiate replication
+ connections; superusers have this permission by default.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -355,7 +355,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- This reports that status of all connected standby servers.
+ This reports the status of all connected standby servers.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@
<para>
This returns the time on the primary that generated the most
- recently commit or abort record applied on the standby.
+ recent commit or abort record applied on the standby.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -413,8 +413,8 @@
<listitem>
<para>
Add <filename>recovery.conf</> setting <link
- linkend="pause-at-recovery-target"><varname>pause_at_recovery_target
- to pause</></link> recovery at target (Simon Riggs)
+ linkend="pause-at-recovery-target"><varname>pause_at_recovery_target</></link>
+ to pause recovery at target (Simon Riggs)
</para>
<para>
@@ -573,7 +573,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>
- Support they keyword 'all' in the host column of <link
+ Support the keyword 'all' in the host column of <link
linkend="auth-pg-hba-conf"><filename>pg_hba.conf</></link>
(Peter Eisentraut)
</para>
@@ -657,7 +657,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- This are like the database-wide statistics counter views but
+ These are like the database-wide statistics counter views but
reflect counts for only the current transaction.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -787,7 +787,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- Specifically, let <command>SELECT</> query results be feed
+ Specifically, let <command>SELECT</> query results be fed
into <command>INSERT</>, <command>UPDATE</>, <command>DELETE</>
statements.
</para>
@@ -869,7 +869,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>
Allow new values to be added to an existing enum type via
- <link linkend="SQL-ALTERTYPE"><command>ALTER TYPE</></link>(Andrew
+ <link linkend="SQL-ALTERTYPE"><command>ALTER TYPE</></link> (Andrew
Dunstan)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1406,7 +1406,7 @@
<para>
Allow <literal>public</> as a pseudo-role name in <link
linkend="functions-info-access-table"><function>has_table_privilege()</></link>
- and and related functions (Alvaro Herrera)
+ and related functions (Alvaro Herrera)
</para>
<para>
@@ -1478,7 +1478,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>
Add <link linkend="plpgsql-foreach-array"><command>FOREACH IN
- ARRAY</></link> to plpgsql to allow array interation (Pavel
+ ARRAY</></link> to plpgsql to allow array iteration (Pavel
Stehule)
</para>
@@ -2145,7 +2145,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- Previously a empty-array query that used an index might return
+ Previously an empty-array query that used an index might return
different results from one that used a sequential scan.
</para>
</listitem>
* Re: 9.1 release notes corrections
@ 2011-03-20 12:28 Magnus Hagander <magnus@hagander.net>
parent: Thom Brown <thom@linux.com>
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From: Magnus Hagander @ 2011-03-20 12:28 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Thom Brown <thom@linux.com>; +Cc: pgsql-docs
On Sun, Mar 20, 2011 at 12:57, Thom Brown <thom@linux.com> wrote:
> Hi,
>
> I attach a patch to address various errata in the PostgreSQL 9.1 release notes.
Applied, thanks!
--
Magnus Hagander
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* Re: 9.1 release notes corrections
@ 2011-03-21 19:16 Leslie S Satenstein <lsatenstein@yahoo.com>
parent: Thom Brown <thom@linux.com>
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From: Leslie S Satenstein @ 2011-03-21 19:16 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: pgsql-docs
To the person responsible.
Before you create the next update to the PDF files, please do a review to correct all the prototypes that have their text being truncated at the right margin. The respecting of margins means I may be able to use my e-book to read the pdf. I do a lot of commuting and benefit from off-line reading.
------------------
Regards
Leslie
Mr. Leslie Satenstein
40 years in IT and going strong.
Yesterday was a good day, today is a better day,
and tomorrow will be even better.
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--- On Sun, 3/20/11, Thom Brown <thom@linux.com> wrote:
From: Thom Brown <thom@linux.com>
Subject: [DOCS] 9.1 release notes corrections
To: "pgsql-docs" <pgsql-docs@postgresql.org>
Date: Sunday, March 20, 2011, 7:57 AM
Hi,
I attach a patch to address various errata in the PostgreSQL 9.1 release notes.
Thanks
--
Thom Brown
Twitter: @darkixion
IRC (freenode): dark_ixion
Registered Linux user: #516935
EnterpriseDB UK: http://www.enterprisedb.com
The Enterprise PostgreSQL Company
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* Re: 9.1 release notes corrections
@ 2011-03-21 20:53 Alvaro Herrera <alvherre@commandprompt.com>
parent: Leslie S Satenstein <lsatenstein@yahoo.com>
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From: Alvaro Herrera @ 2011-03-21 20:53 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Leslie S Satenstein <lsatenstein@yahoo.com>; +Cc: pgsql-docs
Excerpts from Leslie S Satenstein's message of lun mar 21 16:16:03 -0300 2011:
> To the person responsible.
>
> Before you create the next update to the PDF files, please do a review to correct all the prototypes that have their text being truncated at the right margin. The respecting of margins means I may be able to use my e-book to read the pdf. I do a lot of commuting and benefit from off-line reading.
Please send a patch.
--
Álvaro Herrera <alvherre@commandprompt.com>
The PostgreSQL Company - Command Prompt, Inc.
PostgreSQL Replication, Consulting, Custom Development, 24x7 support
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* Re: 9.1 release notes corrections
@ 2011-03-21 23:28 Leslie S Satenstein <lsatenstein@yahoo.com>
parent: Alvaro Herrera <alvherre@commandprompt.com>
0 siblings, 0 replies; 5+ messages in thread
From: Leslie S Satenstein @ 2011-03-21 23:28 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Alvaro Herrera <alvherre@commandprompt.com>; +Cc: pgsql-docs
How do you want a patch. I will give you page and line from the existing PDF, if that is what you would like.
------------------
Regards
Leslie
Mr. Leslie Satenstein
40 years in IT and going strong.
Yesterday was a good day, today is a better day,
and tomorrow will be even better.
mailto:lsatenstein@yahoo.com
alternative: leslie.satenstein@itbms.biz
www.itbms.biz
--- On Mon, 3/21/11, Alvaro Herrera <alvherre@commandprompt.com> wrote:
From: Alvaro Herrera <alvherre@commandprompt.com>
Subject: Re: [DOCS] 9.1 release notes corrections
To: "Leslie S Satenstein" <lsatenstein@yahoo.com>
Cc: "pgsql-docs" <pgsql-docs@postgresql.org>
Date: Monday, March 21, 2011, 4:53 PM
Excerpts from Leslie S Satenstein's message of lun mar 21 16:16:03 -0300 2011:
> To the person responsible.
>
> Before you create the next update to the PDF files, please do a review to correct all the prototypes that have their text being truncated at the right margin. The respecting of margins means I may be able to use my e-book to read the pdf. I do a lot of commuting and benefit from off-line reading.
Please send a patch.
--
Álvaro Herrera <alvherre@commandprompt.com>
The PostgreSQL Company - Command Prompt, Inc.
PostgreSQL Replication, Consulting, Custom Development, 24x7 support
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