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From: Tom Lane <[email protected]>
To: Dmitry Igrishin <[email protected]>
Cc: pgsql-docs <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: 21.3 Template database
Date: Tue, 04 Aug 2015 10:18:39 -0400
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Dmitry Igrishin <[email protected]> writes:
> The sentence of 2nd paragraph says:
> "This is particularly handy when restoring a pg_dump dump"
> I suggest to add apostrophe:
> "This is particularly handy when restoring a pg_dump's dump"

> The sentece of 5th paragraph says:
> "The principal limitation is that no other sessions can be connected
> to the source database while it is being copied. CREATE
> DATABASE will fail if any other connection exists when it starts;
> during the copy operation, new connections to the source database are
> prevented."
> I suggest to get rid from redundant phrase:
> "The principal limitation is that no other sessions can be connected to the
> source database while it is being copied and CREATE DATABASE will fail if
> any other connection exists when it starts."

TBH, both of those seem to read worse to me than what's there now.

			regards, tom lane


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