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From: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
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Subject: Re: Missing preposition 'of'
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PG Doc comments form <noreply@postgresql.org> writes:
> By the end of section 7.2.1.5, the preposition 'of' is missing:
> "(...) we could find out which ones those are like this: (...)"
> should read
> "(...) we could find out which ones of those are like this: (...)"

I dunno, the existing wording seems like perfectly good English to
me, while your revision is at best awkward.

			regards, tom lane