Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3) tls TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1so0Wb-007bFi-A1 for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Tue, 10 Sep 2024 13:03:18 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1so0WZ-00Cyhz-Vr for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Tue, 10 Sep 2024 13:03:15 +0000 Received: from makus.postgresql.org ([2001:4800:3e1:1::229]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3) tls TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1so0WZ-00Cyhr-O3 for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Tue, 10 Sep 2024 13:03:15 +0000 Received: from smtp.outgoing.loopia.se ([93.188.3.37]) by makus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3) tls TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1so0WW-000T3S-8z for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Tue, 10 Sep 2024 13:03:14 +0000 Received: from s807.loopia.se (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by s807.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTP id 13EFDB7810 for ; Tue, 10 Sep 2024 15:03:04 +0200 (CEST) Received: from s934.loopia.se (unknown [172.22.191.6]) by s807.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTP id F37C6B7268; Tue, 10 Sep 2024 15:03:03 +0200 (CEST) Received: from s898.loopia.se (unknown [172.22.191.6]) by s934.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTP id F203A7CEA85; Tue, 10 Sep 2024 15:03:03 +0200 (CEST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amavis.loopia.se X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -1.2 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.2 tagged_above=-999 required=6.2 tests=[ALL_TRUSTED=-1, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1] autolearn=disabled Authentication-Results: s898.loopia.se (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=yesql.se Received: from s981.loopia.se ([172.22.191.6]) by s898.loopia.se (s898.loopia.se [172.22.190.17]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with UTF8LMTP id y9oQ1wHKk1mL; Tue, 10 Sep 2024 15:03:03 +0200 (CEST) X-Loopia-Auth: user X-Loopia-User: daniel@yesql.se X-Loopia-Originating-IP: 89.255.232.193 Received: from smtpclient.apple (customer-89-255-232-193.stosn.net [89.255.232.193]) (Authenticated sender: daniel@yesql.se) by s981.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 6201C22B16DC; Tue, 10 Sep 2024 15:03:03 +0200 (CEST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=yesql.se; s=loopiadkim1707475645; t=1725973383; bh=pR7GQq20eSByjGinndZxdrx+XxVDPOnXEZmlxTpWtzc=; h=Subject:From:In-Reply-To:Date:Cc:References:To; b=jQIgXLpw5/RStxxg9fY5R5qpB/BPySXgwubH9Q3mZk2KN4B9rdKPp441Cg66ZCG6C pbWQ4aFJqG7LOxLzsvM/OqhnxP+Y4zIjPuauyXhy9eWHL5puNrN2BJJGNSc8vUnAB2 fqQhNGG/OG2dLk2i0Vf4ZbeOWwKeehR6c9xeA/CLqQ1Jpc9iuYiaw4zZiOD8jnovbF AgTOmIyVTUIDfBVGfAZweu4LFqMZhAtuyKCGb1fN68rhYIDDde2WkNq2h3Q43hcj/2 JlxvbwkW+lRFDii/6LtOfhvs+8uHzcCDFV7UKowbzUHmzS+ulm++0KkIhUVTSAzKHl uKg0XWzMs/pJg== Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 16.0 \(3774.600.62\)) Subject: Re: Documentation improvement patch From: Daniel Gustafsson In-Reply-To: <2a9455d8-2938-4346-93bc-2eb02b6261e0@postgrespro.ru> Date: Tue, 10 Sep 2024 15:02:52 +0200 Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Message-Id: <3233C0FF-2EED-4A57-8FFF-ACAEDAE2706C@yesql.se> References: <2a9455d8-2938-4346-93bc-2eb02b6261e0@postgrespro.ru> To: Oleg Sibiryakov X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.3774.600.62) List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Archived-At: Precedence: bulk > On 10 Sep 2024, at 13:46, Oleg Sibiryakov = wrote: > 1. Since we do not want to use here, I suggest we hyphenate = it as "built-in". What's your take on it? I think that's the right choice given the hyphenation used in the rest = of the docs. There are a few more places on that same page which should be = built-in rather than builtin to separate the concept from the parameter value. -- Daniel Gustafsson