Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1m5pKb-0008CS-8j for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Tue, 20 Jul 2021 12:58:41 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1m5pK3-0007BX-Ha for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Tue, 20 Jul 2021 12:58:07 +0000 Received: from makus.postgresql.org ([2001:4800:3e1:1::229]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1m5pK3-0007BP-98 for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Tue, 20 Jul 2021 12:58:07 +0000 Received: from mail.postgrespro.ru ([93.174.131.139]) by makus.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1m5pJz-0004T8-0R for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Tue, 20 Jul 2021 12:58:06 +0000 Received: from [192.168.1.13] (109-252-87-120.nat.spd-mgts.ru [109.252.87.120]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mail.postgrespro.ru (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id A88AF21CB717 for ; Tue, 20 Jul 2021 15:58:00 +0300 (MSK) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=postgrespro.ru; s=mail; t=1626785880; bh=vecLu/FiuZJPETG5M30ei3YbTVo634ougobg3MXFo0c=; h=To:From:Subject:Date; b=C7WljLe+0I46kAmdGbEyrJjAIjkUFnKmVY5uhWJlWooHw8d9/ZczwYdzGMceg+an4 qZI8FMUNQZ6FAkpbuoy9h3Lbwux6aF3IU7M/uVwRjRaaIIr9eTR0EJaIKXMNKTvJL6 ALvsf2ZFKSmoREJLhHA3goQE+1g1ioc7SFiHZtN4= To: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org From: Elena Indrupskaya Subject: Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes Message-ID: <38555778-a56b-4aca-2581-e05582fc9bcf@postgrespro.ru> Date: Tue, 20 Jul 2021 15:58:00 +0300 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:78.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/78.11.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="------------B56A1812F5924068E4816AFE" Content-Language: en-US List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Archived-At: Precedence: bulk This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------B56A1812F5924068E4816AFE Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="------------FFAA1580CE379E731C6E470C" --------------FFAA1580CE379E731C6E470C Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Hello everyone, I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A patch to fix them is attached. One of the replacements changes "which reports WAL activity" to "to report WAL activity" because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or just add a comma before "which"). -- Elena Indrupskaya Lead Technical Writer Postgres Professional http://www.postgrespro.comtext. --------------FFAA1580CE379E731C6E470C Content-Type: text/html; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit

Hello everyone,

I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A patch to fix them is attached.
One of the replacements changes

"which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
"to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"

because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or just add a comma before "which").

--
Elena Indrupskaya
Lead Technical Writer
Postgres Professional http://www.postgrespro.comtext.
--------------FFAA1580CE379E731C6E470C-- --------------B56A1812F5924068E4816AFE Content-Type: text/x-patch; charset=UTF-8; name="rn_14_language.patch" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="rn_14_language.patch" diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml index ecd074361c6..4f0437f87d9 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml @@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ Author: Peter Geoghegan Reduce the default value of to better reflects current + linkend="guc-vacuum-cost-page-miss"/> to better reflect current hardware capabilities (Peter Geoghegan) @@ -1441,7 +1441,7 @@ Author: Fujii Masao Add system view pg_stat_wal - which reports WAL activity (Masahiro Ikeda) + to report WAL activity (Masahiro Ikeda) @@ -1936,7 +1936,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier - Previously these functions could only be executed by super-users, + Previously these functions could only be executed by superusers, and this is still the default. @@ -2599,7 +2599,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane - Floating point data types already supported these. + Floating-point data types already supported these. @@ -2610,7 +2610,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane --> - Improve the accuracy of floating point computations involving + Improve the accuracy of floating-point computations involving infinity (Tom Lane) --------------B56A1812F5924068E4816AFE--