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Daniel Gustafsson <daniel@yesql.se> writes:
> Skimming the page I noticed that we wrap CSV in <literal/> in all but a =
few
> places, which seemed randomly "chosen".  Another sentence which stood ou=
t to me
> was this one on FREEZE:

> 	"This violates the normal rules of MVCC visibility and users specifying
> 	should be aware of the potential problems this might cause."

> The use of "specifying" seems odd to me, removing it makes it read clear=
er
> IM-non-native-O.

I suppose the author was aiming at "specifying it", but I agree that
just dropping "specifying" works fine with fewer words.

> The attached includes all the above suggestions.

LGTM.

			regards, tom lane