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Date: Fri, 14 Jul 2006 08:19:57 -0700
From: "Joshua D. Drake" <jd@commandprompt.com>
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To: Robert Treat <xzilla@users.sourceforge.net>
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Subject: Re: maintenance diff
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Robert Treat wrote:
> On Thursday 13 July 2006 20:58, Joshua D. Drake wrote:
>> Hello,
>>
>> Updated to have stronger wording for vacuuming. Cleaned out some extra
>> superlatives. Added a couple of index entries for Routine Maintenance
>> and added entry specific to Analyze.
> 
> I noticed a number of typos in this... 
> 
> s/Gbord/Gborg/
> s/Gforg/Gforge/ 


(I am not surprised I did that)

> s/including, mailing/including mailing
> s/forums and cvs/forums, and cvs,/
> s/pgFoundry/PgFoundry/
> 
> I think there might be some other issues too... like saying gborg is 
> deprecated is likely to imply something wrong with the projects there rather 
> than the site itself. 

I can extend that... The Gborg site is deprecated and all current 
projects are moving to Gforge.

> 
> There were a couple of other minor things I noticed too... Joshua, do you mind 
> if I make some changes and resubmit this patch? 

Let me go back through it first please.

Joshua D. Drake

> 


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