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From: Erik Rijkers <[email protected]>
To: [email protected]
Subject: pgbench doc typos
Date: Tue, 12 Jan 2016 16:27:59 +0100
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2 typo's in doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml


Another (separate) small thing:

I did not understand this sentence:

    "Notice that while the plain (unaggregated) log file contains index
    of the custom script files, the aggregated log does not."

"contains index"?  what does that mean?

Not understanding, I have not changed it. I think it could be made more 
clear.


thanks,


Erik Rijkers


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  [text/x-diff] pgbench.sgml.diff (754B, 2-pgbench.sgml.diff)
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--- doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml.orig	2016-01-12 16:10:35.740698813 +0100
+++ doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml	2016-01-12 16:18:20.386170448 +0100
@@ -1031,7 +1031,7 @@
  0 84 4142 0 1412881037 918023 2333
  0 85 2465 0 1412881037 919759 740
 </screen>
-   In this example, transaction 82 was late, because it's latency (6.173 ms) was
+   In this example, transaction 82 was late, because its latency (6.173 ms) was
    over the 5 ms limit. The next two transactions were skipped, because they
    were already late before they were even started.
   </para>
@@ -1072,7 +1072,7 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-   Here is example outputs:
+   Here is example output:
 <screen>
 1345828501 5601 1542744 483552416 61 2573
 1345828503 7884 1979812 565806736 60 1479


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