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From: Shigeru HANADA <[email protected]>
To: [email protected]
Subject: Different wording in file_fdw document
Date: Wed, 19 Sep 2012 20:06:28 +0900
Message-ID: <[email protected]> (raw)

I found the term "foreign data server" in file_fdw document.  It doesn't
sound so strange, but "foreign server" or "server" (when context is
clear) are used for same meaning in other places, so users might be
confused by third form.

IMO it would be better to use qualified "foreign server" here.

-- 
Shigeru HANADA

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
index 889aa77..4acb826 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ CREATE EXTENSION file_fdw;
 </programlisting>
 
   <para>
-   Then create a foreign data server:
+   Then create a foreign server:
 
 <programlisting>
 CREATE SERVER pglog FOREIGN DATA WRAPPER file_fdw;


Attachments:

  [text/plain] file_fdw_doc.patch (388B, 2-file_fdw_doc.patch)
  download | inline diff:
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
index 889aa77..4acb826 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/file-fdw.sgml
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ CREATE EXTENSION file_fdw;
 </programlisting>
 
   <para>
-   Then create a foreign data server:
+   Then create a foreign server:
 
 <programlisting>
 CREATE SERVER pglog FOREIGN DATA WRAPPER file_fdw;


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