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Date: Mon, 24 Mar 2014 09:17:26 -0600
From: Joshua Tolley <eggyknap@gmail.com>
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Subject: Minor docs patch for pg_basebackup
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I took a minor dislike to the wordsmithing in pg_basebackups docs page. Patch
attached.

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Joshua Tolley / eggyknap
End Point Corporation
http://www.endpoint.com

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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_base=
backup.sgml
index ede68db..6ce0c8c 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_basebackup.sgml
@@ -41,9 +41,9 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
=20
   <para>
    <application>pg_basebackup</application> makes a binary copy of the dat=
abase
-   cluster files, while making sure the system is automatically put in and
+   cluster files, while making sure the system is put in and
    out of backup mode automatically. Backups are always taken of the entire
-   database cluster, it is not possible to back up individual databases or
+   database cluster; it is not possible to back up individual databases or
    database objects. For individual database backups, a tool such as
    <xref linkend=3D"APP-PGDUMP"> must be used.
   </para>

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