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On 4/16/14, 9:51 PM, Bruce Momjian wrote:
> I have developed the attached doc patch to improve the wording on this
> topic.

I think this is an eloquent phrasing of my understanding of what the 
original text tried to convey.


Regards,
Marko Tiikkaja


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