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In that case they communicate over a TCP/IP networ= k > connection. You should keep this in mind, because the files that can be > accessed on a client machine might not be accessible **(or might only be > accessible using a different file name)** on the database server machine.= " >=20 > The distinction "(or might only be accessible using a different file name= )" > does not add to the concept and degrades reading. I propose to remove it: > "As is typical of client/server applications, the client and the server c= an > be on different hosts. In that case they communicate over a TCP/IP networ= k > connection. You should keep this in mind, because the files that can be > accessed on a client machine might not be accessible on the database serv= er > machine." I agree with that proposal. Do you want to prepare a patch? Yours, Laurenz Albe