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Dave Cramer <davecramer@gmail.com> writes:
>> -   <command>postgres</command> should wait before restarting the
>> process, in
>> +   <command>postgres</command> should wait before restarting the
>> process in

> As a native English speaker, I was left wondering what else the timeout
> would be used for.

Maybe s/in case/if/ ?  Or s/in case/after/ ?  It does seem like this
sentence needs more help than just comma-removal.

			regards, tom lane