Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1ooLh2-0001Me-HZ for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Fri, 28 Oct 2022 09:30:24 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1ooLh1-0000FK-Dz for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Fri, 28 Oct 2022 09:30:23 +0000 Received: from makus.postgresql.org ([2001:4800:3e1:1::229]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1ooLh1-0000F7-6l for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Fri, 28 Oct 2022 09:30:23 +0000 Received: from smtp.outgoing.loopia.se ([93.188.3.37]) by makus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1ooLgx-0003E7-SS for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Fri, 28 Oct 2022 09:30:22 +0000 Received: from s807.loopia.se (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by s807.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTP id 79B9F2F4E921 for ; Fri, 28 Oct 2022 11:30:13 +0200 (CEST) Received: from s934.loopia.se (unknown [172.22.191.5]) by s807.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6B02D2E285E8; Fri, 28 Oct 2022 11:30:13 +0200 (CEST) Received: from s472.loopia.se (unknown [172.22.191.6]) by s934.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTP id 683AD7CEA2E; Fri, 28 Oct 2022 11:30:13 +0200 (CEST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amavis.loopia.se X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -1 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1 tagged_above=-999 required=6.2 tests=[ALL_TRUSTED=-1] autolearn=disabled Received: from s934.loopia.se ([172.22.191.6]) by s472.loopia.se (s472.loopia.se [172.22.190.12]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with LMTP id 1kUtIb8es0Fp; Fri, 28 Oct 2022 11:30:12 +0200 (CEST) X-Loopia-Auth: user X-Loopia-User: daniel@yesql.se X-Loopia-Originating-IP: 89.255.232.193 Received: from smtpclient.apple (customer-89-255-232-193.stosn.net [89.255.232.193]) (Authenticated sender: daniel@yesql.se) by s934.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id D6AF37CEA5C; Fri, 28 Oct 2022 11:30:12 +0200 (CEST) From: Daniel Gustafsson Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 16.0 \(3696.100.31\)) Subject: Re: First Person being used (only occurs in 2 other places in all of documentation) Date: Fri, 28 Oct 2022 11:30:12 +0200 References: <166692508416.630.9910522387468316027@wrigleys.postgresql.org> To: wolakk@gmail.com, pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org In-Reply-To: <166692508416.630.9910522387468316027@wrigleys.postgresql.org> Message-Id: <7CFAD02E-28A2-4383-8162-200667F7772D@yesql.se> X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.3696.100.31) List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Archived-At: Precedence: bulk > On 28 Oct 2022, at 04:44, PG Doc comments form = wrote: >=20 > The following documentation comment has been logged on the website: >=20 > Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/15/cube.html > Description: >=20 > I believe the use of First Person (I) is to be avoided in the = documentation. > It is incredibly rare in all of the documentation. I agree with this (and the other two emails about the same), these = instances would be better reworded to match the rest of the documentation. -- Daniel Gustafsson https://vmware.com/