Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3) tls TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1qurJI-001ua9-TT for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Mon, 23 Oct 2023 09:33:21 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1qurJF-007LuO-6j for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Mon, 23 Oct 2023 09:33:17 +0000 Received: from makus.postgresql.org ([2001:4800:3e1:1::229]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3) tls TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1qurJE-007LuF-E7 for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Mon, 23 Oct 2023 09:33:17 +0000 Received: from mail.postgrespro.ru ([93.174.131.139]) by makus.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.94.2) (envelope-from ) id 1qurJA-001sk4-KM for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Mon, 23 Oct 2023 09:33:15 +0000 Received: from [172.30.2.10] (unknown [172.30.2.10]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) (Authenticated sender: m.yablokov@postgrespro.ru) by mail.postgrespro.ru (Postfix/587) with ESMTPSA id 40322E203E9; Mon, 23 Oct 2023 12:33:10 +0300 (MSK) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=postgrespro.ru; s=mx2023; t=1698053590; bh=v9Ntq6oD6/dslDuE27MmfY5a36lJ1y5GbH0wyGpYxAI=; h=Message-ID:Date:User-Agent:Subject:To:Cc:References:From: In-Reply-To:From; b=3bmCICCGpOH/k+jkSA75jU9O+LueSo9Jk5mmTfGgoCk4jO5v/O5SamfSwNQUq8xx3 D+ZdVhqcMpk3JbBhA04KYMpouRiey5EgUvjPgESSEDmTn92MVmIJtMFYZ8gWueJeSX qlDJKIXtWs/L7e+jVZRm/ULEwJSrWLm2Uyr5pQiGQSW5olf2PWjRHgAuwk03TfyJEd Y7fq81DdqAR/Box58Alc798Qeg8E+MXLZEmAV7gefdLgmBLsnuHpsIzM9B8WpX+GFt S/a2UqDdv6j7IcWUfqEmWLme6caSJ1YSoXAL92oQubQ9gGHtShBP52/o1LQXlKfLnG +yji8fpSYEgbQ== Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="------------MwD8DJDDWYIavIBJPiCkjn6d" Message-ID: <7aad518b-3e6d-47f3-9184-b1d69cb412e7@postgrespro.ru> Date: Mon, 23 Oct 2023 12:33:03 +0300 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird Subject: Re: Minipatch concerning tags + new spelling/punctuation patch To: Michael Paquier Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org References: <4c2a430b-32e2-44e2-aeca-03b7db6824e4@postgrespro.ru> Content-Language: en-US From: Maxim Yablokov Organization: Postgres Professional In-Reply-To: List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Archived-At: Precedence: bulk This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------MwD8DJDDWYIavIBJPiCkjn6d Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="------------IR5Ieq000e52EyX1Qr5PJXrZ" --------------IR5Ieq000e52EyX1Qr5PJXrZ Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Hello! Thanks a lot! We have also prepared a small patch concerning spelling, punctuation, etc. We've decided to send it separately, so it'll be easier to review. Please have a look. (just in case: e.kiryanova@postgrespro.ru, e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru, o.sibiryakov@postgrespro.ru, m.yablokov@postgrespro.ru) 23.10.2023 04:01, Michael Paquier пишет: > On Sat, Oct 21, 2023 at 04:11:50PM +0900, Michael Paquier wrote: >> But not this one. This could just be "WAL senders", but we also use >> the term "walsender" in physical and logical replication areas, so a >> plural looks OK for me here, leaving it as it is now. > I have reverted this change, added one markup for a catalog_xmin that > was missed, fixed a few whitespaces, and applied it on HEAD. > > Thanks! > -- > Michael -- Best regards, Maxim Yablokov Technical writer-translator Postgres Professional --------------IR5Ieq000e52EyX1Qr5PJXrZ Content-Type: text/html; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit

Hello!

Thanks a lot!

We have also prepared a small patch concerning spelling, punctuation, etc. We've decided to send it separately, so it'll be easier to review. Please have a look.

(just in case: e.kiryanova@postgrespro.ru, e.indrupskaya@postgrespro.ru, o.sibiryakov@postgrespro.ru, m.yablokov@postgrespro.ru)

23.10.2023 04:01, Michael Paquier пишет:
On Sat, Oct 21, 2023 at 04:11:50PM +0900, Michael Paquier wrote:
But not this one.  This could just be "WAL senders", but we also use
the term "walsender" in physical and logical replication areas, so a
plural looks OK for me here, leaving it as it is now.
I have reverted this change, added one markup for a catalog_xmin that
was missed, fixed a few whitespaces, and applied it on HEAD. 

Thanks!
--
Michael
--
Best regards,
Maxim Yablokov
Technical writer-translator
Postgres Professional
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