Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1hRPv6-0002Wv-Cz for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Thu, 16 May 2019 23:36:16 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1hRPv5-0002f5-0w for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Thu, 16 May 2019 23:36:15 +0000 Received: from magus.postgresql.org ([2a02:c0:301:0:ffff::29]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1hRPv4-0002ey-Fu for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Thu, 16 May 2019 23:36:14 +0000 Received: from meldrar.postgresql.org ([2a02:c0:301:0:ffff::31]) by magus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1hRPv1-0003Pd-LI for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Thu, 16 May 2019 23:36:13 +0000 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; q=dns/txt; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=postgresql.org; s=20171124; h=Content-Type:In-Reply-To:MIME-Version:Date: Message-ID:From:References:Cc:To:Subject:Sender:Reply-To: Content-Transfer-Encoding:Content-ID:Content-Description; bh=qDhd4HB8doZ7uPZAToafl3aOpyuJ0sjpXcvBirdM8lg=; b=tmNUCXqs22EvywO/s130dJC1i3 RR3+6kIuGL0b8CENADhSMEMv5C6yQbdY7Ay+YKK5eSHEx5D1Fgo4skl5kRP8NBAYBDaRhsRn0TTsQ mdaVUOq4TRmdrw9a12xP3I4U2+pGLlsw/bUb0E+F/dtn5XyZCgTdvFtBWy0IwBmVv4Ud5I9hy7Y+1 9f5eD7FHEW3jJT4XhuhHnc0zbrqfVVxNRA1CExjp/qem4QOEb4/hUFDY1qe59CUHyF5CZmN0jJq/X T0fJzgVutvkbk4mIsAiPOa9hkmfV+ryNMPoEsO/lLudFAU0Gm8qvsnL/o1QqKggmb8pqLXCvICIVz 8plvYJXw==; Received: from [2600:8807:c240:dd00:152c:4c9b:4453:86bf] (helo=Ph33r-Retina.local) by meldrar.postgresql.org with esmtpsa (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1hRPuy-0005Bd-Ai; Thu, 16 May 2019 23:36:10 +0000 Subject: Re: some grammar fixes for docs To: Michael Paquier , Liudmila Mantrova Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org References: <92961161-9b49-e42f-0a72-d5d47e0ed4de@postgrespro.ru> <20190516233253.GB20887@paquier.xyz> From: "Jonathan S. 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Katz" To: Michael Paquier , Liudmila Mantrova Cc: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org Message-ID: <8c3041c5-9d37-a310-c884-f38709ffbe65@postgresql.org> Subject: Re: some grammar fixes for docs References: <92961161-9b49-e42f-0a72-d5d47e0ed4de@postgrespro.ru> <20190516233253.GB20887@paquier.xyz> In-Reply-To: <20190516233253.GB20887@paquier.xyz> --0JhgRNq0Dp19PCVwoSXcxsMIxTDs8N9yq Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1252 Content-Language: en-US Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On 5/16/19 7:32 PM, Michael Paquier wrote: > On Thu, May 16, 2019 at 05:11:37PM +0300, Liudmila Mantrova wrote: >> I have noticed imperfect grammar in a couple of sgml files, please con= sider >> a small patch (attached). >=20 > Thanks, Liudmila for caring about such matters. >=20 >> >> - Transaction which last more than limit milliseconds >> + Transactions that last more than limit milliseconds >> are counted and reported separately, as late. >> >=20 > I don't see much of a difference between "which" or "that" in this > context, and you are right about the plural for "Transactions". Any > native English speaker around or anybody with an extra opinion? >=20 >> >> Of the two operator classes for type point, >> quad_point_ops is the default. kd_poin= t_ops >> - supports the same operators but uses a different index data structu= re which >> + supports the same operators but uses a different index data structu= re that >> may offer better performance in some applications. >> >=20 > Same here. Technically it should be "that" - often you say "which" when one is speaking, but in writing, in the above cases, "that" is grammatically correct. 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