Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1lpQaS-0008HU-FY for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Sat, 05 Jun 2021 07:19:16 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1lpQaR-0007v9-AZ for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Sat, 05 Jun 2021 07:19:15 +0000 Received: from makus.postgresql.org ([2001:4800:3e1:1::229]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1lpQaQ-0007v0-EM for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Sat, 05 Jun 2021 07:19:15 +0000 Received: from forward2-smtp.messagingengine.com ([66.111.4.226]) by makus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1lpQaL-0006r1-Po for pgsql-docs@postgresql.org; Sat, 05 Jun 2021 07:19:13 +0000 Received: from compute5.internal (compute5.nyi.internal [10.202.2.45]) by mailforward.nyi.internal (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8353E19409F2; Sat, 5 Jun 2021 03:19:08 -0400 (EDT) Received: from mailfrontend1 ([10.202.2.162]) by compute5.internal (MEProxy); Sat, 05 Jun 2021 03:19:08 -0400 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d= messagingengine.com; h=cc:content-transfer-encoding:content-type :date:from:in-reply-to:message-id:mime-version:references :subject:to:x-me-proxy:x-me-proxy:x-me-sender:x-me-sender :x-sasl-enc; s=fm3; bh=TJBHq161bLgGsAA1BRnyVQguVBb83clPLPUFuy6mm Xw=; b=SU+b2q2Cy9MQ0WYqeWLsqtM21y+FeSGs2dh3lfqI2Vk0MBdMjr79vgM3p Iukzpl0aFDBNs0z/47i8LXnKkExb34o+S34LOP5MQK9A6QKX7uAyoz7hOS+63JXP wvPai2abSwPbozITPtmq2kKzdO4ElEUDmRQ+xsdScjSKW/th1C2fiAcd9BxE2y8b kxfm82pJKowCk7uF2sN+5k7ez83fV7JBhNNhOiaAFbQ4KUcRdz5P7x0f6AH+xZbc knq19ztoyWTJXP0DFjJvTqRGmcYyASXsihi7IRVgS/jTHh8xyqKhQkNts7mRh2kU SgkOdnjV1lktfI3KAcEmPbPHGz7xA== X-ME-Sender: X-ME-Received: X-ME-Proxy-Cause: gggruggvucftvghtrhhoucdtuddrgeduledrfedtvddgudduiecutefuodetggdotefrod ftvfcurfhrohhfihhlvgemucfhrghsthforghilhdpqfgfvfdpuffrtefokffrpgfnqfgh necuuegrihhlohhuthemuceftddtnecusecvtfgvtghiphhivghnthhsucdlqddutddtmd enucfjughrpefuvfhfhffkffgfgggjtgfgsehtjeertddtfeehnecuhfhrohhmpefrvght vghrucfgihhsvghnthhrrghuthcuoehpvghtvghrrdgvihhsvghnthhrrghuthesvghnth gvrhhprhhishgvuggsrdgtohhmqeenucggtffrrghtthgvrhhnpefhfeelfeeuveduvdff heejtdejjefglefhtddvffehledutedugeeffedtffffjeenucevlhhushhtvghrufhiii gvpedtnecurfgrrhgrmhepmhgrihhlfhhrohhmpehpvghtvghrrdgvihhsvghnthhrrghu thesvghnthgvrhhprhhishgvuggsrdgtohhm X-ME-Proxy: Received: by mail.messagingengine.com (Postfix) with ESMTPA; Sat, 5 Jun 2021 03:19:06 -0400 (EDT) Subject: Re: Simplify COMMENT and SECURITY LABEL documentation To: Alvaro Herrera Cc: Tom Lane , pgsql-docs References: <202106021932.idmbjjaqk7ke@alvherre.pgsql> From: Peter Eisentraut Message-ID: <8e719d88-b64f-e3e7-890c-7692a8047b59@enterprisedb.com> Date: Sat, 5 Jun 2021 09:19:03 +0200 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.15; rv:78.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/78.10.2 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <202106021932.idmbjjaqk7ke@alvherre.pgsql> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1252; format=flowed Content-Language: en-US Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Archived-At: Precedence: bulk On 02.06.21 21:32, Alvaro Herrera wrote: > On 2021-Jun-02, Peter Eisentraut wrote: > >> On 01.06.21 17:56, Alvaro Herrera wrote: >>>> +1 for the concept, but I feel that "live in" is a bit too informal >>>> for this context. I'm too caffeine-deprived to instantly come up >>>> with le mot juste; but perhaps "exist within" would be an improvement? >>> >>> The glossary uses "reside in". >> >> I like that. > > So I would adjust the glossary as in the attached patch. done and done