Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1jZ8Re-0003LQ-JX for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Thu, 14 May 2020 07:38:18 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1jZ8Rc-0003iA-1f for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Thu, 14 May 2020 07:38:16 +0000 Received: from magus.postgresql.org ([2a02:c0:301:0:ffff::29]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1jZ8Rb-0003i3-Rp for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Thu, 14 May 2020 07:38:15 +0000 Received: from smtp.outgoing.loopia.se ([93.188.3.37]) by magus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.3:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1jZ8RZ-0003nK-My for pgsql-docs@postgresql.org; Thu, 14 May 2020 07:38:15 +0000 Received: from s807.loopia.se (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by s807.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTP id 54296309B9CE for ; Thu, 14 May 2020 09:38:11 +0200 (CEST) Received: from s499.loopia.se (unknown [172.22.191.6]) by s807.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTP id 342082EB3349; Thu, 14 May 2020 09:38:11 +0200 (CEST) Received: from s474.loopia.se (unknown [172.22.191.6]) by s499.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTP id 308531CDAEAD; Thu, 14 May 2020 09:38:11 +0200 (CEST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amavis.loopia.se X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -1 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1 tagged_above=-999 required=6.2 tests=[ALL_TRUSTED=-1] autolearn=disabled Received: from s645.loopia.se ([172.22.191.6]) by s474.loopia.se (s474.loopia.se [172.22.190.14]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with LMTP id E6LpU57crNBD; Thu, 14 May 2020 09:38:10 +0200 (CEST) X-Loopia-Auth: user X-Loopia-User: daniel@yesql.se X-Loopia-Originating-IP: 89.255.232.193 Received: from [192.168.72.43] (customer-89-255-232-193.stosn.net [89.255.232.193]) (Authenticated sender: daniel@yesql.se) by s645.loopia.se (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 6D735156E4C8; Thu, 14 May 2020 09:38:10 +0200 (CEST) Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 12.4 \(3445.104.14\)) Subject: Re: TLS docs fixes for From: Daniel Gustafsson In-Reply-To: <20200514021713.GB166343@paquier.xyz> Date: Thu, 14 May 2020 09:38:09 +0200 Cc: pgsql-docs@postgresql.org Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Message-Id: <928D3FE2-7DB9-4AA9-9AAD-5CD1F09448EF@yesql.se> References: <401F9024-20EA-4239-83C4-6B7AD35F94BD@yesql.se> <20200514021713.GB166343@paquier.xyz> To: Michael Paquier X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.3445.104.14) List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Precedence: bulk > On 14 May 2020, at 04:17, Michael Paquier wrote: >=20 > On Wed, May 13, 2020 at 11:07:44PM +0200, Daniel Gustafsson wrote: >> While working with TLS I noticed that the password callback = definition had an >> extra newline in the programlisting in the docs. Since the = >> has been indented with the textblock, the newline comes from = whitespace being >> significant. The attached 0001 fixes by instead anchoring = on >> column zero like how most of the docs do it. Grepping around I found = one more >> instance of the same pattern which is also included. >=20 > Indeed, I can see the difference. In what I spotted after applying > 0001, you are patching the one in libpq.sgml as of 0002 but in a > different, correct, way, and I have spotted three more inconsistencies > within doc/src/sgml/datatype.sgml in the zone for timestamps. Right, I omitted them to avoid churn since they are using = correctly, just in a different way from the rest of the docs. I'll = leave the call whether they should be included for consistency sake to you. > With everything I found on top of your stuff, I finish with the > attached. Does it look fine to you? +1, thanks for picking it up! cheers ./daniel=