Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1hRH6o-0001QW-MS for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Thu, 16 May 2019 14:11:47 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=malur.postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1hRH6l-0000eJ-T3 for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Thu, 16 May 2019 14:11:43 +0000 Received: from magus.postgresql.org ([2a02:c0:301:0:ffff::29]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1hRH6l-0000eC-GC for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Thu, 16 May 2019 14:11:43 +0000 Received: from cyclops.postgrespro.ru ([93.174.131.138] helo=mail.postgrespro.ru) by magus.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.89) (envelope-from ) id 1hRH6i-0006It-91 for pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org; Thu, 16 May 2019 14:11:42 +0000 Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail.postgrespro.ru (Postfix) with ESMTP id 13E4721C414B for ; Thu, 16 May 2019 17:11:39 +0300 (MSK) X-Virus-Scanned: Debian amavisd-new at postgrespro.ru X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: 0 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=x tagged_above=-99 required=4 WHITELISTED tests=[] autolearn=unavailable Received: from [192.168.27.64] (gw.postgrespro.ru [93.174.131.141]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mail.postgrespro.ru (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id CED5C21C3CC7 for ; Thu, 16 May 2019 17:11:38 +0300 (MSK) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=postgrespro.ru; s=mail; t=1558015898; bh=5gZ2qztY/RFO4FuPe/w7uTr3303I/vuqNevyuOzKS4o=; h=To:From:Subject:Date; b=L+mCjYSKpBFc7zmk+IZ/9Kv4BzAQW2J65kQtIs4BezDKcpl+nBkC0sZXyB4ZqtThE 78yQ0bgZ39AyLSfGkRJivx3lWwcAmESBytBfjZfrAcXRCxon3GKbgMs5frASXicTQ4 cKMxtXKCC9tsLF6oSwVjYq3zsR1m7++N7KoWgEIk= To: pgsql-docs@lists.postgresql.org From: Liudmila Mantrova Subject: some grammar fixes for docs Message-ID: <92961161-9b49-e42f-0a72-d5d47e0ed4de@postgrespro.ru> Date: Thu, 16 May 2019 17:11:37 +0300 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:60.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/60.6.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="------------102F3E75ABBD636C268E3A1B" Content-Language: en-US List-Id: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Post: List-Owner: List-Archive: Precedence: bulk This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------102F3E75ABBD636C268E3A1B Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Hi, I have noticed imperfect grammar in a couple of sgml files, please consider a small patch (attached). -- Liudmila Mantrova Technical writer at Postgres Professional: http://www.postgrespro.com The Russian Postgres Company --------------102F3E75ABBD636C268E3A1B Content-Type: text/x-patch; name="grammar-fixes.patch" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="grammar-fixes.patch" diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml index ee2501b..ef22a48 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml @@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ pgbench options d limit - Transaction which last more than limit milliseconds + Transactions that last more than limit milliseconds are counted and reported separately, as late. diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgml index d43ef13..7cf9d0e 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgml @@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ Of the two operator classes for type point, quad_point_ops is the default. kd_point_ops - supports the same operators but uses a different index data structure which + supports the same operators but uses a different index data structure that may offer better performance in some applications. @@ -292,9 +292,9 @@ leaf_consistent additionally returns a boolean result. The methods must not modify any fields of their input structs. In all cases, the output struct is initialized to zeroes before calling the - user-defined method. Optional sixth method compress - accepts datum to be indexed as the only argument and returns value suitable - for physical storage in leaf tuple. + user-defined method. The optional sixth method compress + accepts datum to be indexed as the only argument and returns a value suitable + for physical storage in a leaf tuple. @@ -447,9 +447,9 @@ typedef struct spgChooseOut type that was to be inserted into the index. leafDatum is a value of spgConfigOut.leafType - type which is initially an result of method + type, which is initially a result of method compress applied to datum - when method compress is provided, or same value as + when method compress is provided, or the same value as datum otherwise. leafDatum can change at lower levels of the tree if the choose or picksplit @@ -868,7 +868,7 @@ typedef struct spgLeafConsistentOut Converts the data item into a format suitable for physical storage in a leaf tuple of index page. It accepts spgConfigIn.attType - value and return + value and returns spgConfigOut.leafType value. Output value should not be toasted. --------------102F3E75ABBD636C268E3A1B--