Received: from maia.hub.org (maia-2.hub.org [200.46.204.251]) by mail.postgresql.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 38E711337BD8 for ; Wed, 30 Mar 2011 05:18:57 -0300 (ADT) Received: from mail.postgresql.org ([200.46.204.86]) by maia.hub.org (mx1.hub.org [200.46.204.251]) (amavisd-maia, port 10024) with ESMTP id 75613-07 for ; Wed, 30 Mar 2011 08:18:38 +0000 (UTC) X-Greylist: from auto-whitelisted by SQLgrey-1.7.6 Received: from outmail148161.authsmtp.com (outmail148161.authsmtp.com [62.13.148.161]) by mail.postgresql.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2D85C1337BA8 for ; Wed, 30 Mar 2011 05:18:38 -0300 (ADT) Received: from mail-c193.authsmtp.com (mail-c193.authsmtp.com [62.13.128.118]) by punt6.authsmtp.com (8.14.2/8.14.2/Kp) with ESMTP id p2U8IbOP024091 for ; Wed, 30 Mar 2011 09:18:37 +0100 (BST) Received: from mail-qw0-f46.google.com (mail-qw0-f46.google.com [209.85.216.46]) (authenticated bits=0) by mail.authsmtp.com (8.14.2/8.14.2) with ESMTP id p2U8IZ14089715 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-SHA bits=128 verify=FAIL) for ; Wed, 30 Mar 2011 09:18:36 +0100 (BST) Received: by qwk3 with SMTP id 3so646934qwk.19 for ; Wed, 30 Mar 2011 01:18:35 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.229.40.134 with SMTP id k6mr667197qce.242.1301473115204; Wed, 30 Mar 2011 01:18:35 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.229.96.9 with HTTP; Wed, 30 Mar 2011 01:18:35 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <4D92E502.9050804@2ndQuadrant.com> References: <4D92E502.9050804@2ndQuadrant.com> Date: Wed, 30 Mar 2011 09:18:35 +0100 Message-ID: Subject: Re: English Grammar question From: Simon Riggs To: Susanne Ebrecht Cc: pgsql-docs Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Server-Quench: 4f78d66e-5aa6-11e0-97bb-002264978518 X-AuthReport-Spam: If SPAM / abuse - report it at: http://www.authsmtp.com/abuse X-AuthRoute: OCdxZQATClZOTQEd DAteCiN5VAwpPBRK HVkIKg5MOFUSTAAU PkFRNXJLN0YASktU QCdXRQsWBxNyWXwI OkhObwVcY1pOVg9r WEJKRBxQFAx2CRkf BB8YTB10aABOf2Fx KwZgO3giNkV+dU50 RU9RW24CbWcubDYY WBRecVZJdVIbeAJE awV/SXoKMzcaZnpi RVFvbm9hYGwPPh5Y EEk+AXU5enNDMzgz QxEZHX0AB0QAQiwp ZwU7J0UAHUEXWgAA X-Authentic-SMTP: 61633235383639.1014:706 X-AuthFastPath: 0 (Was 255) X-AuthVirus-Status: No virus detected - but ensure you scan with your own anti-virus system. X-Virus-Scanned: Maia Mailguard 1.0.1 X-Spam-Status: No, hits=-1.9 tagged_above=-5 required=5 tests=BAYES_00=-1.9 X-Spam-Level: X-Archive-Number: 201103/134 X-Sequence-Number: 6567 On Wed, Mar 30, 2011 at 9:08 AM, Susanne Ebrecht wrote: > Hello, > > during translation the history.sgml - I found the following sentences in > > http://www.postgresql.org/docs/9.0/static/history.html > > "The design of the rule system at that time was described in The design o= f > the POSTGRES rules system. The rationale and architecture of the storage > manager were detailed in The design of the POSTGRES storage system " > > I am not sure if the grammar is correct here. > > My feeling says it should be: > > "is decribed" and "are detailed"=A0 instead of "was and were" > > I am pretty sure these books still exist. I think both are correct, but you are right that those books still exist and so it looks archaic and can be reworded. --=20 =A0Simon Riggs=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 http:/= /www.2ndQuadrant.com/ =A0PostgreSQL Development, 24x7 Support, Training & Services