Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.80) (envelope-from ) id 1ZMc4O-0006vC-Tv for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Tue, 04 Aug 2015 13:15:53 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with smtp (Exim 4.84) (envelope-from ) id 1ZMc4O-00050L-8p for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Tue, 04 Aug 2015 13:15:52 +0000 Received: from magus.postgresql.org ([2a02:c0:301:0:ffff::29]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.84) (envelope-from ) id 1ZMc4N-0004zA-OZ for pgsql-docs@postgresql.org; Tue, 04 Aug 2015 13:15:51 +0000 Received: from mail-io0-x22a.google.com ([2607:f8b0:4001:c06::22a]) by magus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.84) (envelope-from ) id 1ZMc4L-0002kH-9L for pgsql-docs@postgresql.org; Tue, 04 Aug 2015 13:15:51 +0000 Received: by iodd187 with SMTP id d187so16159124iod.2 for ; Tue, 04 Aug 2015 06:15:47 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:date:message-id:subject:from:to:content-type; bh=kiXMaLjV3K/xZsDIY9Tor9dG4gNlKYmPEUR9ZcRXJGk=; b=dETE64G2O15K5C1FQhiaR6/1pTOYTR/7OnaRG6gJHL7OS7iCDH63kx7p6rKsqrI6LC uPpta67kIy3Kq9V43N02YZNVm73oV2c3OYeVEWTeCR/3ab2kC2fZ8RnUausI2d+Q/ouh es/8+5PCvlMeln6aTvaoN845SpqTDSRqTIvJa/JuPDOd0ZC/PapIq9NNzvcvMFRIPczf bAjEPNIGPcT+CtLKSw5nTHPAzey3PotGk/DLXGDpDT8EYHbVuH2mZpHNVkvU8yH2PHAs vYvE9PmWSC/S8iafqoDnm2PYXECjZkoYTeWGu+T3fwT4J3ehQUnLXPFxksUWhi4VoLHG myqg== MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Received: by 10.107.33.65 with SMTP id h62mr3871024ioh.11.1438694147582; Tue, 04 Aug 2015 06:15:47 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.79.7.87 with HTTP; Tue, 4 Aug 2015 06:15:47 -0700 (PDT) Date: Tue, 4 Aug 2015 16:15:47 +0300 Message-ID: Subject: 21.3 Template database From: Dmitry Igrishin To: pgsql-docs Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=001a1140ffe69b707b051c7c1532 X-Pg-Spam-Score: -2.0 (--) List-Archive: List-Help: List-ID: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Mailing-List: pgsql-docs Precedence: bulk Sender: pgsql-docs-owner@postgresql.org --001a1140ffe69b707b051c7c1532 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 The sentence of 2nd paragraph says: "This is particularly handy when restoring a pg_dump dump" I suggest to add apostrophe: "This is particularly handy when restoring a pg_dump's dump" The sentece of 5th paragraph says: "The principal limitation is that no other sessions can be connected to the source database while it is being copied. CREATE DATABASE will fail if any other connection exists when it starts; during the copy operation, new connections to the source database are prevented." I suggest to get rid from redundant phrase: "The principal limitation is that no other sessions can be connected to the source database while it is being copied and CREATE DATABASE will fail if any other connection exists when it starts." -- // Dmitry. --001a1140ffe69b707b051c7c1532 Content-Type: text/html; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
The sentence of 2nd paragraph says:
"This is part= icularly handy when restoring a pg_dump dump"
I suggest to a= dd apostrophe:
"This is particularly handy when restoring a = pg_dump's dump"

The sentece of 5th paragr= aph says:
"The principal limitation is that no other session= s can be connected
to the source database while it is being copie= d. CREATE
DATABASE will fail if any other connection exists when = it starts;
during the copy operation, new connections to the sour= ce database are prevented."
I suggest to get rid from redund= ant phrase:
"The principal limitation is that no other sessi= ons can be connected to the source database while it is being copied and CR= EATE DATABASE will fail if any other connection exists when it starts."= ;

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// Dmitry.

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