Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1bAHDB-0007Uy-R1 for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Tue, 07 Jun 2016 13:38:29 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with smtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1bAHDB-0000QF-Dt for pgsql-docs@arkaria.postgresql.org; Tue, 07 Jun 2016 13:38:29 +0000 Received: from magus.postgresql.org ([2a02:c0:301:0:ffff::29]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1bAHCp-0008Sp-9s for pgsql-docs@postgresql.org; Tue, 07 Jun 2016 13:38:07 +0000 Received: from mail-oi0-x22a.google.com ([2607:f8b0:4003:c06::22a]) by magus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1bAHCi-000579-D0 for pgsql-docs@postgresql.org; Tue, 07 Jun 2016 13:38:06 +0000 Received: by mail-oi0-x22a.google.com with SMTP id p204so81073731oih.3 for ; Tue, 07 Jun 2016 06:38:00 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc; bh=ahYY38ExBXi5zChjy6JYfKICpALxGz21Yv/ieaEvUso=; b=kUa52h7H1OsP+hO3Rk5s+xT3sccSMPASF8JzUAXz8oz1gRcitF1nRgasFlOHJsraSZ e2LGGBMNPDVVdAcf6OPIwlOt0JpKRwsBv99tPId0w8ss//HYNN0ZUJ2Lx7pCjpfE7oru ct9eMmkPVN9Sgf9C1WtLyMN/oFOYnZSAVGE3axr69TkMJWSFPVtkeagclut8Zdpbvua2 Zk9mCBPOdKrKDQPGfI+E/Nx8aqS8/AaRwXJYyQtLNDkMDWLCkZiIzcFAJ2ppAYVFsHNG xpZmNhK5SGuu3MWuz6SwoqjKiZcdMHmN5/qOKbzmzu/pWOGCb8eWRj4RKvrs+/RUNK7c ISkA== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20130820; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc; bh=ahYY38ExBXi5zChjy6JYfKICpALxGz21Yv/ieaEvUso=; b=X+dGx6ZptrajJjcxEWwuqs2rrPJOiIbBRsxGnQqzLtacImhg3OPbJgc9em1Ie/s2Ol +4RSKb0+7VWqRRKj4biPD6Tn6pjIC7489bwKIzGLpH+2PcUXnmK2yri1UPKPsQ3CXzwb /ciqj+ePPiuGJ5WcZsSTuZjjICQmr9S/wgpreTBj0/53POi1OFf4+s0ItoADvUsoDkuj 5qXvBR1uPUFz3Jfo5HMgDOk5YgKv9nHq9BulIrzMtcXSY/fKhKm9twaa80T1Q65kN0M3 bigYdNQj1EirG0wkTQhlYgbaBuWVEkJLXbN5Eo9gJ2kcteZg9ks7uC2EYEFJdZ4LR5Vl /mZw== X-Gm-Message-State: ALyK8tJS0tmuKtLM2XTlfsHI+zA7F7v2y33FDCbTuOMThEjkLFOvbMnrH8S6C97T7Z3u+wPFepZr/Uh/4q6rbA== X-Received: by 10.202.64.214 with SMTP id n205mr11997793oia.104.1465306678560; Tue, 07 Jun 2016 06:37:58 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.182.19.133 with HTTP; Tue, 7 Jun 2016 06:37:58 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: References: From: Kevin Grittner Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 08:37:58 -0500 Message-ID: Subject: Re: Typo. To: Dmitry Igrishin Cc: pgsql-docs Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 X-Pg-Spam-Score: -2.7 (--) List-Archive: List-Help: List-ID: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Mailing-List: pgsql-docs Precedence: bulk Sender: pgsql-docs-owner@postgresql.org On Tue, Jun 7, 2016 at 8:22 AM, Dmitry Igrishin wrote: > 2016-06-07 15:44 GMT+03:00 Kevin Grittner : >> On Tue, Jun 7, 2016 at 6:26 AM, Dmitry Igrishin wrote: >> >>> In "Internal position: this is defined the same as the P field, but it >>> is used when the cursor position refers to an internally generated", >>> "internally generated" should be replaced with "internally-generated". >> >> Not according to, for example, the Chicago Manual of Style: >> >> http://www.chicagomanualofstyle.org/16/images/ch07_tab01.pdf >> >> (See the "adverb ending in ly + participle or adjective" category.) >> >> I'm pretty sure that this has been discussed on this list before >> and decided in favor of omitting the hyphenation in such cases. > Hm, well, how about removing hypenation from > "Internal query: the text of a failed internally-generated command", > "procedural language functions and internally-generated queries", > at https://www.postgresql.org/docs/9.6/static/protocol-error-fields.html > and similar in other places? I think we should be consistent, especially on adjacent lines. Oddly, a single commit 12 years ago used both in close proximity. -- Kevin Grittner EDB: http://www.enterprisedb.com The Enterprise PostgreSQL Company -- Sent via pgsql-docs mailing list (pgsql-docs@postgresql.org) To make changes to your subscription: http://www.postgresql.org/mailpref/pgsql-docs