Received: from malur.postgresql.org ([217.196.149.56]) by arkaria.postgresql.org with esmtp (Exim 4.80) (envelope-from ) id 1aQEDM-0004qZ-8e for pgsql-hackers@arkaria.postgresql.org; Mon, 01 Feb 2016 13:08:20 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1] helo=postgresql.org) by malur.postgresql.org with smtp (Exim 4.84) (envelope-from ) id 1aQEDL-00046n-Ig for pgsql-hackers@arkaria.postgresql.org; Mon, 01 Feb 2016 13:08:19 +0000 Received: from makus.postgresql.org ([2001:4800:1501:1::229]) by malur.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.84) (envelope-from ) id 1aQEDK-00045p-4Q; Mon, 01 Feb 2016 13:08:18 +0000 Received: from mail-qg0-x232.google.com ([2607:f8b0:400d:c04::232]) by makus.postgresql.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.84) (envelope-from ) id 1aQEDC-0001dw-Th; Mon, 01 Feb 2016 13:08:16 +0000 Received: by mail-qg0-x232.google.com with SMTP id b35so116512557qge.0; Mon, 01 Feb 2016 05:08:10 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type; bh=DDwjGoWg71evR1K5P7WMul4opKYjj4bt0Yd2JYWjvp0=; b=QkxrvcvSiujWpK2zBv8Yg4mTVWBPCy633NxUXQK7MevEBrTNxc+kaeCaIqaKqtE1Sx mnu8vorhA6tp6JVy3xHjkg3fQkgv3YWK4XOuiQHh6C7dg8bwBpSi0kNFkCvliR6DJ+zu WmQVVE0rflrAY9nmfpbQFOxvfFUZjLqnCke8SozPyhAyA0RqT5uCzJrRJfnqrZOZkkws EJv1lp8Nt2PNMJZGOuMgwcCfZTZAa1D7UDM+G9o2DZG4Uo1SkSSuwWTAdxtR1SgWrFoR 1c4qL9QatAF5HwhARQ+oRu8q1lMC4+N2hPcWtWf5HcJyeKojbh0NCVmFt+26M2Ct9k/0 8V0Q== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20130820; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date :message-id:subject:from:to:cc:content-type; bh=DDwjGoWg71evR1K5P7WMul4opKYjj4bt0Yd2JYWjvp0=; b=M7du2O64Irc5zoKl3u46c/D+ReEp1sssK0CFxcTan7EnSXTjn18ggCkD2Cx5wu02Yp mzx60pOhNcrNNfe93V7dxVUEkmSJBi6Eko1tgHkQcPSstp2knhuLWd4YBUMWnM5kgQVC Mzpobu6pAuMJFyxj6Ht8KXyCJxZa4W3B3CdWMxqBeHdM1CnsxfbSNrxLtAFaff7lAkNk 17QjQlOjgW/iI/ufo1eCydWYa/zydZcNqD0shRuAuJgjG8GYwkgY1hI4BXEnKYYDIWyl kO/3vbhtU+oHxxV2TwN/JSz49nysFB1+scNReV4MGLC9iDZdAVCOEP0mSZtYhGKa430H UMZg== X-Gm-Message-State: AG10YOQLemgmehMsEx6E5+KH4HIPuEsdEV+AjPODBeNvlNwOIga83jqfghjVJc4bsTNu8ODK9qqLDTXbwi3btQ== MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Received: by 10.140.101.130 with SMTP id u2mr29062244qge.71.1454332089783; Mon, 01 Feb 2016 05:08:09 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.55.157.2 with HTTP; Mon, 1 Feb 2016 05:08:09 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: <661df7c9f9634bb7116be15e9a8638e8@xs4all.nl> References: <486824e5bbd6eef5061bcfc370c666a1@xs4all.nl> <661df7c9f9634bb7116be15e9a8638e8@xs4all.nl> Date: Mon, 1 Feb 2016 22:08:09 +0900 Message-ID: Subject: Re: Fwd: [DOCS] pgbench doc typos From: Fujii Masao To: Erik Rijkers Cc: PostgreSQL-development , pgsql-hackers-owner@postgresql.org Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 X-Pg-Spam-Score: -2.7 (--) List-Archive: List-Help: List-ID: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Mailing-List: pgsql-hackers Precedence: bulk Sender: pgsql-hackers-owner@postgresql.org On Wed, Jan 27, 2016 at 8:32 PM, Erik Rijkers wrote: > On 2016-01-27 11:06, Erik Rijkers wrote: >> >> Two trivial changes to doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml - Here is example outputs: + Here is example output: "Here are example outputs" is better? In 9.4 document, that description was used for the example outputs of per-transaction logging. > I did not understand this sentence: > > "Notice that while the plain (unaggregated) log file contains index > of the custom script files, the aggregated log does not." > > "contains index"? what does that mean? > > Not understanding, I have not changed it. I think it could be made more > clear. What about the following? -------------------- When multiple custom script files are specified with -f option, while the plain (unaggregated) log file contains file_no field which identifies which script file is used, the aggregated log does not. Therefore if you need per script data,